Ethereal_Light37
The story is interesting. But i found the FL character less believable with few flaws making its character and plot a little boring. The novel isnt bad instaead the story line is very good just that i dont feel it believable that the FL is someone from the underworld that to an heiress of someone powerful in the underworld. Her actions gives away to her being someone from the underworld. As a person being in the dark for most of her life should be cautious of her every step that too at a time when theres a bounty on her head plus when she suddenly gets tonkonw about her twin sis from her sister's foster father when she is on the run how and why couldnt she find it suspicious. This i felt was the most foolish thing she did agreeing to her sister's foster fathers plans without any suspicion. The first thing she did in the story made me feel she a fake but i let go and read the rest then again found her in similar situations which given her circumstances and descriptions should have done better..her weak character description makes her less convincing makeing the story a little dull and boring where her actions csn be seen through from before.
After reading tons of reviews and still scared of the plot with child and wife of ml that's not fl and worst her sister. I had my doubts but I still went ahead read it all the worries dissipated with just first chapter. The only annoying thing so far is that ml and twin sister deserved each other as both of them were unfaithful in their marriage but the fl is so pure and untainted strong. She deserves better than ml I know he loves her and went heven and hell for her but the ml is a little very little bit disappointing and it cannot be changed that he was once married to her twin sis and they did the deed even though it was nothing for both it's not fair for fl
I only have one thing to say: why bother giving the MC the background of being raised by gangsters and saying she was really smart and trained in martial arts and then give her the personality of a really sheltered, naive and lovesick idiot. Is absurd and a torture for me to read. I came here thinking she's going to be one thing and it's the complete opposite. Disappointing
A story anyone would like to read, i enjoyed reading it as of date, i know the end is already near, its one novel that im surely proud of i was able to read despite all the spelling, grammatical errors which are tolerable and the chapters cliff hangers, its worth all the time and spirit stones. Overall 100% love this story.