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This story is just in its initial phases, but the foreshadowing of an intense battle for the MC and his FL (Maybe FL? xD!) had been set in stone. I find the concept quite interesting. Although I'm not a big fan of Sci-Fi stories, I do read them occasionally (albeit rarely). The merging of technology and cultivation are the highlight of this story and I am looking forward to how it will unfold. More power to the author and I am looking forward to Theodore and Turia's adventure in the world that you made.
This is very beautiful! I'm not really into sci-fi genre since I couldn't understand anything, but this book is really easy to read and understand. I'm still confused at other parts, but that just my nature since I'm not really reading sci-fi. I hope to see more of Theodore. And I'm still reading it.
Good work author! I must admit that I am not that familiar with the genre but I am still hooked. Which is why I think it's good! The 'info dumping' as they termed it actually helped me understand what was happening. I am rooting for Theo and I like that he's humble, eager but determined. I am rooting for them all! Quite intrigued with Duunim too. HAHA. I'll definitely read everytime you update!
The situation the MC was in at the beginning was really painted for me, and I was able to picture it happen as I read it. His interaction with the mysterious events, consistently seeking for answers, that don't get answered right away helps push the MC in the right direction. I really enjoyed the relationship between the orb and the MC, and hope this back and forth continues throughout the book. It is also nice to see a cultivation novel set in a science fiction story line, as it doesn't always work, but the author was able to make it work, and work well. Added to my library, can't wait to read more.
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