1 1 -- the start?

Just know that I haven't seen any GOT and this is my first novel. There will not be too much trouble with grammar however, I will struggle with ideas and overall development so please feel free to give me any suggestions. I have also written this on my phone since my laptop is broken as hell. "Speech"

'thoughts'

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This day was by far the most depressing day of Chen's life. He always tried to stay out of confrontation but sadly, his class wasn't exactly full of the nicest people. He was 18 and in his last year of college before going to university but because of his laziness, he decided to take an easy course in a college which had a rather terrible reputation. He wasn't expecting to make friends and he certainly wasn't expecting to make enemies but his college lived up to its reputation. Chen himself was a rather handsome individual, he looked rather average in the crowd but when focused on, his well defined face and athletic physique truly stood out, not to mention his heterochromia. He was always annoyed by this since once someone noticed, everyone would be on his case leading to him having to exhaust himself through one of the worst possible ways - Social Interaction - don't get him wrong, Chen loves talking to his friends and other interesting people but his fellow students weren't exactly the most appealing people. Today was terrible exactly because someone found out about his eyes and it resulted in everyone bothering him. Chen decided to take his time in walking home whilst developing countermeasures for the people who'd barrage him with questions tomorrow. Chen couldn't brag about much however, If there was anything Chen had confidence in, it was his ability to fight. He isn't a brawler but instead a skilled fighter. He had spent the majority of his childhood researching and perfecting his combat techniques for nothing apart from the reason of betterment. He was rather annoyed at the fact that anyone with experience could handle someone with obvious advantages in a fight so he decided to make it so that he can beat those who are at the so called 'peak'. Chen was a genius with shocking potential but thanks to a lack of drive, he doesn't really excel in others eyes leading to the negative thoughts of others, labelling him as a 'waste'. With enough drive, Chen could easily surpass any current methods of technology and could easily excel but motivating Chen was near impossible. As Chen was walking home, he'd noticed something slightly off. He heard screams and although Chen was no hero, he liked to think that he had a good sense of moral code and he was always up for adventure. So he ran towards the screams.

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