The God of Supremacy

Im kind of biased but i hope you guys will support me in my effort to make a great story. If there are any ways you want me to tweak the story or and changes you want me to make to the plot make sure you guys leave a comment

*sigh* I knew it. You call my story a **** but yours were also bad. I admit, the betrayal scene is good. But if you want to make it more sadder than it should've been, you could've read some Fanfic's on Wattpad about betreyals. But instead, you rushed it up. Even though your work is a bit of messy, I'll appreciate to see the MC grow strong(if you wanted to). Not just some op from the start MC. I admit, having assassination experience were good, but can you assassinate someone who's powered levels were shits? But as an author like you, I gave you more stars that you gave me. I feel the struggles of an author, so keep up and read more fanfictions(system one or not) to gain more inspiration. Remember. A story don't start with great power. If then, author/writer's block would stop you and make your work be hated.