TheSimpleGamer
So I took a look at your chapter list and noticed a lot of the chapters are just updates on why you’re not even bothering to update the novel. The 1 star review is just because I haven’t actually read anything yet, but with how you just keep making excuses on why you aren’t updating then I can confidently say your novel won’t be worth the time to.
I just read till chapter 3 + 2 prologue then dropped. I'm the type of reader who likes to read stories with logical concepts otherwise I get headaches just by trying to understand things. I'm a daydreamer so I mostly read to increase my repertoire of things to imagine basically to get inspiration. So I mainly choose to read stories I find interesting (mainly based on synopsis). I read yours meaning I did find it interesting. What I usually do is primarily understand something then visualize it. This is my main form of entertainment when reading and creates the most immersion for me. One of the things really important to me is the concept of "power levels" and yours is just broken for me, can't see it or imagine it. I don't really like the DBZ verse but I still searched it up and understand some things and with my understanding of Zeno is, then you're God rankings is just absurd for me (Zeno is the weakest of the weakest out of all 8 major realms with even more 5 sub-realm per major realm). Now, I wouldn't normally write a review just because of that but I read through all your story's reviews (17 of them to be precise) and none of them are constructive. Might as well all be considered bogus reviews to make your rating higher, except for three...one being the author, another which didn't really say much, and the last one which didn't even read but I understand his reason why he did so. So, I wrote this to counterbalance the overall rating, provide another real review, and show a more realistic overall story rating. Hope the author doesn't mind. Thanks for writing your story anyway. Good luck with your academics and writing endeavor. P.S. Sorry if you received too many notifications. I keep deleting it due to typos.
Simple here, this is my first time making a novel and I hope it comes out good or at least entertaining. I make mistakes because I just had to go back and rewrite the synopsis and this review, to correct it and a few other things. I have school still so I don't know have my updates will be but I know it will at least be 1 Chp a week or at best 1 a day. Criticism is needed and wanted.
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