Reviews of The Girl Who Never Believe in Fate

First off I love the cover. Although there are a couple of grammar mistakes, I enjoyed reading this. Maybe looking for more from this author.

Oh my god. Too many grammar mistakes. It's too awkward to read past even a few sentences. Maybe find a editor or proof reader to help you with that.

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the picture looks good and the summary seems nice but the first turn off that most readers will have is the grammar which is evident near the end of the summary is bad happened? especially in a romance novel where flow is the most important part of the whole experiance

It has a nice storyline and I personally enjoyed reading it. The plot is original, and the characters have deep peronailties or backgrounds. Good luck and keep writing!

So far loving it!! Keep up with the good! Hope you’ll upload more chapters later on!! So far the story is very interesting! I’ll be waiting for more

Hmmmmm this story doesn't really capture and draw the reader in that well... It's kinda cringe especially with weird word choice :< Just my opinion though!