SaiKirito
i found some common misspellings and a few mixed up words but the write style was clear and easy to read. I'm hoping to see more updates, while maintaining a steady pace. Story Development is amazing but i feel like our Character is well defined and pretty OP. I feel like there could be more detail on the characters background and that sometimes it feels like its brought up then brushed off.I have to say this is one of the best novels I've read in a long time.
Overall great story design. Has a cliche beginning but yet it somehow manages to still be interesting at the start. The MC has some cool powers and he also has tons of lineages and bloodlines to connect to his character. The MC is also very interesting as he has the morals of an honorable warrior. I like how instead of getting a harem of team members his party is made up of men who know how to fight. A small touch is a loli cat girl but thats acceptable. All the characters have backstories and I like how they are all unique. The only thing I wish there was more of would be faster updates.
I really like the story so far, im at the 3rd chspter now. Just 2 questions, are all novels here free to read(well theres nothing free in this world we live in but id like to know if some are free or all are pay-to-read)? And is The General free to read also? Im just a kid i dont have the money to pay but if theres an alternative id be happy to do just so i can read :)
Hey everyone! Author here! The reason behind no chaps is cuz the charger point in my phone got ****ed up hard and its hard to charge my phone, so it takes time to charge it and only at 100% I can start writing chap! I really apologize for this! Its all cuz of my stupid temper! I really do hope u understand my situation right now T-T
I gotta admit. It has potential, but the fact that he seems to have no editor to help spell check, or to better phrase certain areas pisses me off. It always does. There are multiple spelling errors, and there are multiple phrases that are commonly repeated, especially with how he looks like a demon or devil. The former can easily be addressed by having an editor, but the latter is something that only the author can do. Have a bit more variety, it always helps. Other than that, he does pretty well.
I love the story and the development but Im not entirely sure if the mc is Op or not his powers are constantly changing and its hard to keep track as well as sometimes he uses his abilities and sometimes he doesn't it confuses me a bit but besides that this story has a lot of potential I like the idea of a samurai in a magic world along with the fact that his number of enemies is huge Im hoping he makes his own kingdom with a samurai based army that would be dope maybe even recruit monsters. I just hope the author can elaborate on his powers and potential more.