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The Gamer System

IamSuperflous

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IamSuperflous
IamSuperflousAuthorIamSuperflous

Kinda weird reviewing my own fic… whatever. I want to take a moment to clarify a few things. -This is a RPG style fic with leveling system and all. That means there’s training and dungeon, no quick OPness for him -MC will go through different worlds over time but that is for future; right now, he’s in High School DxD X Shinmai Maou no Testament world. -MC is a morally grey character and a bit of cynic -Harem is huge(or rather, just about every girl that interests me) because there’s no such things as too many girls in my dictionary -Issei and Saji are Genderbent but I haven’t decided if I want to do that with others -This fic would probably be mild on puppy love -First five chapters are just a setup so give it some time, it will get better(probably) -This fic is mostly my testing ground. I’ll probably end up writing a better version in future after some experince Thats all

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akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5akasuna123

too generic just feels like the typical gamer fic in highschool dxd. .. ... .... ... .... .... ............. ...... .... ........ .. ..... ....

Great_Abby
Great_AbbyLv3Great_Abby

awesome gamer setting! it feels much organized, and not frantic!

ray_rose
ray_roseLv15ray_rose

I’m enjoying it so far. its pacing is pretty solid and fairly well. there are only 4 chapters out rn so i can say too much about the plot but can say i’m looking forward to reading more chapters. keep up the good work author :)

Anime_Asim
Anime_AsimLv13Anime_Asim

Anything Inspired by Darkwolfshiro, I'm in . 👍🏼

Aidenryu
AidenryuLv13Aidenryu

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Phase_MorningStar
Phase_MorningStarLv3Phase_MorningStar

PLS DONT DROP!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Lence_Laplace
Lence_LaplaceLv13Lence_Laplace

this novel is very good, 5 stars, The story to understand, hope you continue with this Fantastic novel you are doing...has all my support and the staff who are following it too, i am currently on chap 12 and i am loving it all my support for the author to continue the novel...

JhonWark
JhonWarkLv3JhonWark

me gusta está novela de parece a la novela de gamer of the void sin la puta hada además de que el mc es el único que aprovecha los poderes del sistema no como en la otra que el mc literalmente comparte el sistema con todos además ese factor de crueldad en el mc casi siempre es bueno de ver debido a que hay muchos Protas frágiles y debiles

PrinceWithUndies
PrinceWithUndiesLv2PrinceWithUndies

Its is a fun read if you are looking for adult version of DxD and gamery vibe. I can tell that it’s inspired by DarkWolfShiro but its different and definitely enjoyable

ILoveRem
ILoveRemLv2ILoveRem

The best gamer fanfic I've read in a veeeeery long time. It seems inspired by Shiro's stuff but I can't be completely sure. The pacing is excellent, making concise all the boring, repetitive dungeon grinding. The mc is cunning and quite smart I'd say; he seems to be very talented at manipu- convincing others. Hypest I've been for a new story. excellent job author

Mizuki77
Mizuki77Lv2Mizuki77

The pace is kinda too fast for my taste, the Romance is also not so well written, I'm sure you can do it better. Keep the good work author. I'm looking forward to the future chapters. Overall, not so bad.

Great_Abby
Great_AbbyLv3Great_Abby

Thanks, my man! it is a really great gamer story!

Great_Abby
Great_AbbyLv3Great_Abby

Super duper amazing!

Selectials
SelectialsLv4Selectials

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Great_Fr045
Great_Fr045Lv14Great_Fr045

I personally like how well organized it is and how it doesn't feel rushed but what I don't understand is why the author suddenly stopped posting

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Good story. An actual protagonist with common sense. The skills are cool. Personality and relationships of each characters isn’t forced. ThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanks

Frizepize
FrizepizeLv12Frizepize

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Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3Zzz_808

i immediately released and dropped this, i believe that revenge killing will never happen, this is just another beta hiding behind that antihero mc only.

umu
umuLv3umu

umu Its Me, ¡NERO! good use of gaming system, like the mc, like that he is not a brain-dead mc, like the lemon, indeed a good lecture but somehow i feel its gonna be dropped *sad umu*