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I am gonna be total shameless right now giving myself total 5 stars This story is slow which i am going to change later. Yeah bad grammer Not so interesting plot No clue on romance

I will be frank, the starting of this novel was good but after that this novel went downhill. In this novel MC loves to babysit other characters. Mc Doesn't focus on leveling up, but others. Mc strength is average with the gamer system. He doesn't use it to the fullest. All other characters are more powerful than mc. Slow-paced.

Have you considered changing the title to something more fitting like "I got the strongest system in the Naruto world but all I do is use it to babysit the Main Characters"

I'm realy conflicted about this story it starts good but around ch. 10 it starts to get confusing. All this * misterie* that is drop in the story makes it just more confusing and adds unnecessary layers opon layers to the plot. While the Interaktion of the people is good, I always think that the system is wastet in the hands of the Mc, for all his intelligence that he sometimes shows he makes little of the possibility that the system offers. He has a clear goal but is own training in comparison to the other side characters falls short because he helps them and is more of a teacher to them. Overall the story is nice but I would have preferred a Mc that is more focused on his goals and a Mc that is intelligent or dumb but not kind of both at the same time. I would give it about 4 stars

... Dont know if I should even leave a review this bad but this fanfic literally makes no sense. Cant understand if there is any plot or story here ( Well in a way its better this way than what a lot of bs Light novels are doing as it is though). Random characters keep coming up ( Fine u need to make them but what's the big deal making them super Op ) Did not suit my taste but not a bad fanfic, deserves an overall higher rating (3*+) but when rating individually its coming down to 2.2*

In your writing I think it's a little choppy how you go to one subject to the next in just one sentence and you dont describe the characters very detailed which is a big no no for me I just hope you learn from your mistakes and go off of my advice because you have a really good creative mind but you need a little work on your writing skills. Thanks :)

Decent, created character is considerably weak though. Try bouncing ideas for new abilities and ideas if others to try and make the character a more solid personality

The development although slow and sometimes confusing is gradually developing the character's development is excellent, not like those characters who break the world with a system before the age of 5, the story has consistency and gives a very good fanfic that is formed As the chapters pass, in my opinion many comments are underestimating him, he could be much higher in the ranking.

It’s a fun novel but I found this on fan fiction (.) net. I’m not sure if it’s the same author or plagiarism .................................

It's a good read a nice mix of The Gamer one of my favorite characters/powers and Naruto do I recommend this book to anyone that loves them as much as I do

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I really don't know who the mc is if you wanna focus on naruto then make him the mc because the mc only helps others its stupid he has no dreams like his only dream is to make naruto strong is like watching some follower making sure his master is safe and becoming strong its waste of gamer system after so many chafter still don't know how the mc looks

The MC is bland in most scenarios, the system is what save the story. Some of the MC actions are at best confusing as heck, the other he appears with a super powerfull background out of nowhere.

Honestly, you seriously need to brush up on your grammar... Run-on sentences, no punctuation, and the spelling... OOF It's extremely hard to read as it is.

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Great story i have no words.

Great Story. I realy like your way of going about the gamer power and that you make your Story much more realistic than other ffs. I like how the MC ist strong, but only in comperison too his peers and that someone with mor expirience and skill can still threaten him. I hope to see mor chapters for us to enjoy and think that you do a great job of writing this Story

The development although slow and sometimes confusing is gradually developing the character's development is excellent, not like those characters who break the world with a system before the age of 5, the story has consistency and gives very good fanfic that is formed As the chapters pass, in my opinion, many comments are underestimating him, he could be much higher in the ranking.

A great story with good character development and good system. here have the Heimlich maneuver: a first-aid procedure for dislodging an obstruction from a person's windpipe in which a sudden strong pressure is applied on their abdomen, between the navel and the ribcage.

I’ve enjoyed reading this “book” for a while now. At the start the grammar was a bit atrocious and sometimes hard to follow along but it has improved greatly so far. The story line has progressed greatly not to fast nor slow, while keeping the MC in check (Not too OP). I look forward to the next updates. .YT