Reviews of The Gamer's Apocalypse
The Gamer's Apocalypse
HellionPrime
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
writing Quality - I can't say that his grammar sense is bad and I can't say that it is great as well, so 3/5 it is. Story development - it's just terrible MC sees slavers, decides they are savages, kills them all without showing an ounce of mercy and in the next chapter he gets slave of his own. and not to say anything about the 'battle' with slavers taking more than 4.5 hours which is just absurd. Character Design - it's bad, that's all i can say. MC is just psychopath by default because he is a gamer. shows absolutely no reaction to the death of slavers, he uses his drones to make their heads explode and again absolutely no reaction. when he frees the slaves he takes out the guns and ammo from his inventory and again, absolutely no reaction from them. and when he gains slave he just straight up has *** with her... he talks with slaves like nothing while he is supposed to be a neat who knows nothing of the human interactions of the outside world... Writing Quality 3/5 Stability of updates 4/5 because of the fact that it is in the early stages and I will not rate it with 5 stars just yet Story development 1/5 Character Design 1/5 World Background 3/5 just because of the fact that I have only read 11 chapters and there isn't much of a world background explained
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The grammar and update stability is amazing, but the story and character development? Nope, this novel might be good for the newbies, but for those who have seen lots of novel(like me) this novel is not that good? Below average I would say, every female character literally got horny by just seeing the mc’s face, which bring us to mc. He’s a neet, but when he got transported he immediately kill people without emotion, then at chapter 7-8? He’s already raping woman, acting like a spoiled young master who thinks he could get anything he wants. I don’t know why this have a high reviews(probably newbies reader) but for those who expect a mature mc, plot, etc then don’t read this or you’ll be disappointed. Enough of the criticism, the author did an amazing job nonetheless, I think what you should do(Author) is read books and learn from them.
The story is interesting, it's about a man that died and somehow wakeup in a new world that like his world(?). He have a game-like ability and a super power machine or robot that he can control freely. The writing is good and you can understand it easily. Stability of Updates is good too. One of the thing that I kinda hate, is there's only a little characters development, and even it's only the MC that have it. The harem is like a robot, and just there for the purpose of sexual intercourse, they are there only to satisfy the MC lust. I just hope the author give those girls more feeling and character development, than just to make them like ***-dolls or even ***-robot. Like, give them some back-story or have them jealous at each other, or something like that. We need more feeling from them!! And more feeling from the story itself!!! For world background, it's good enough for me, to understand what happen, why it happens, or where it happens, in that world. One thing that I also hope for the author to do, is to give the other characters do more talking. It's feels empty if only the MC or the characters near the MC that the only people that talks. Also, the last one, I hope you didn't make the MC too depents on his op skill that he forget to train his body more. It's not like he always have that skills, right? I mean, some of the skills still have a cooldown, right? What if he use all of them and their cooldown is running, when a really powerfull enemy in front of him? That's all, maybe the rating I give is low than most rating in this novel's review, but I really can't put all five stars even if I want to. Because I hope the author will realize the error in this novel and fix or improves it in the later chapter. Thanks.
I Love the story so far! It's like every "gamers" dream.. To become op but yet not op.. To be able to become strong in the beginning to give you an edge to "put your foot through the door".. Yet at the same time know that your not truly strong enough and that you have to work hard on an end game to dominate through endlessly hard grinding!.. You just have an ability to give a glimpse of what "true power is like" and that you must "grind" your way to reach it! Thanks for your hard work and keep it up!
The novel is very poor. If you've been on this website for any amount of time you'll notice that there is a correlation between how bad a novel is and how many reviews it has from people who speak no legible language. The author switches from first to third person perspective repeatedly. The main character goes from a decent human being to a murderous psychopath in 5 chapters or less. The main character gets a slave girl and has *** with her within the first 12 chapters. GG no RE
I've read this novel before in SOL; I didn’t rate it high back then because there were a lot of spelling and grammar issues. I think he finally listened to us and got himself an editor, although I can still see some issues here and there but not as bad as the original version. Some of the chapters here are new or maybe the author added some new scenes. Without those glaring spelling problems, I can guarantee that this book is freaking awesome. I’ve read some of the comments and reviews here. I have to laugh, what the heck guys, it’s his freaking story, let him tell it the way he wants it. It’s not like you’re paying him to do it. If you know so much about writing a story then go ahead and write something on your own. Then let us criticize the hell out of it too.
