Reviews of The Forsaken Lands

This is my first honest and dedicated novel, to which I feel will go far, as the author I'll be giving it a five star rating, but should you feel it doesn't deserve it, then please comment why, any advice or critics are always appreciated. Humbly, - FazNano

The story is rather fast phase that i barely able to understand what is happening. Some details are not explained well like they already know what to do even though it was their first time doing it.