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The Forgotten Lands

Darkjokes

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RazorIsSharp
RazorIsSharpLv2RazorIsSharp

I like Kai so far! I can't wait for him to become even more sinister, and menacing. I feel like I'd like to know more about the environment and world that they are in, even though some details are mentioned, just so I can 'see' everything happening, but definitely like it! Hope you make the release schedule consistent and try to get to 15,000 words! If you do before a month is up, you'll make it on the New Rankings list, and that will help your book get seen! Keep writing!

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The_Canary
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GrotesqueIce
GrotesqueIceLv2GrotesqueIce

All I can say is, Go, Kai, beat them all up! The story is both interesting and well written. I have seen little to no grammar error and I'm sure that this story has a great future. I want to know more about Kai and his further development. I look forward to more exciting episodes. Keep it up and I wish you the best.

Easy_Tiger
Easy_TigerLv1Easy_Tiger

Read up to chapter 10 and loving the start! Kai is a great protagonist with a mysterious backstory. I look forward to reading more where he came from. While reading this I was getting some strong Dragon Ball z vibes, which was great as I love that show. The extended fight scenes were exciting and well-written and it felt just like I was watching one of my favorite animes. It is indeed an interesting premise and world the author has created. Perfect set up too with the protagonist witnessing the deaths of his parents. I hope some revenge is on the cards!

Gaureeey
GaureeeyLv1Gaureeey

Lets break this down. cover-moderate synopsis- fresh and catchy quality of writing-LOVE THE DESCRIPTIVES AND TONE CONSTANTLY MAINTAINED. IT TRANSPORTS ME TO THE CHILLY TUNDRA RIGHT FROM THE BEGINNING.! character design- so far i love kai and sam both because of their very distinct personas. keep it up!

Anotoki
AnotokiLv11Anotoki

It has a decent plot but your writing is killing it! The characters are good and the pace is a bit slow but it doesn't mean that the story's pace is bad.

Darkjokes
DarkjokesAuthorDarkjokes

Shameless review by the author. Do check my work out and hopefully, I won't disappoint. I'm not a professional writer but I hope I can come up with something good to entertain you all

Babybear
BabybearLv1Babybear

I love the story so far. Just joking cause, I love Kai more. Anyway, I can't wait for the new chapters to come. I really love the way the author is writing right now and how the tone is always maintained. good work author[img=recommend]

JustLikeWriting777
JustLikeWriting777Lv1JustLikeWriting777

The story is crazy interesting and i am really curious about everything, like the characters and the plot - which is intriguing. I can tell this story has potential, by the way it is written. I really like it overall! Will definitely add in my library!

Riyah404
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LaughingSalt
LaughingSaltLv10LaughingSalt

Go Kai! The writing is great and easy to follow. The plot is very captivating, those hooks at the end of the chapters, keeps me wanting to know more. I like the characters, real and believable. Solid background, can't wait to see how powerful Kai gets! Keep it up!

ujjwalanushka34
ujjwalanushka34Lv1ujjwalanushka34

Hii, I just read some chapters, and ngl you got me hooked! I really like Kai. I don't know why but I can feel connected to the protagonist. So well done with that. The story seems promising. Keep writing! Can't wait to see what happens ahead!

Saviour_Ibok_4011
Saviour_Ibok_4011Lv2Saviour_Ibok_4011

It is a very good novel and the plot is interesting and fun. Personally, i love books like this though you could really use some work with the content and edit more while also working on the update stability. Keep this up!!!!!!