Darkjokes
I like Kai so far! I can't wait for him to become even more sinister, and menacing. I feel like I'd like to know more about the environment and world that they are in, even though some details are mentioned, just so I can 'see' everything happening, but definitely like it! Hope you make the release schedule consistent and try to get to 15,000 words! If you do before a month is up, you'll make it on the New Rankings list, and that will help your book get seen! Keep writing!
All I can say is, Go, Kai, beat them all up! The story is both interesting and well written. I have seen little to no grammar error and I'm sure that this story has a great future. I want to know more about Kai and his further development. I look forward to more exciting episodes. Keep it up and I wish you the best.
Read up to chapter 10 and loving the start! Kai is a great protagonist with a mysterious backstory. I look forward to reading more where he came from. While reading this I was getting some strong Dragon Ball z vibes, which was great as I love that show. The extended fight scenes were exciting and well-written and it felt just like I was watching one of my favorite animes. It is indeed an interesting premise and world the author has created. Perfect set up too with the protagonist witnessing the deaths of his parents. I hope some revenge is on the cards!
Lets break this down. cover-moderate synopsis- fresh and catchy quality of writing-LOVE THE DESCRIPTIVES AND TONE CONSTANTLY MAINTAINED. IT TRANSPORTS ME TO THE CHILLY TUNDRA RIGHT FROM THE BEGINNING.! character design- so far i love kai and sam both because of their very distinct personas. keep it up!