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The First Vampire

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louisjacq
louisjacqLv15louisjacq

It's already translated until chapter 97 under the name The original Vampire. Go on novelupdates. It's not the first time that a novel is re translated ๐Ÿ˜”

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SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv14SMomoTempest

โœจ๐Ÿ’ซSOUND INTERESTING๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”...THE ending of the synopsis with the "Holy Water" things attracted me, so I'll give it a chance๐Ÿ’ซโœจ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

SeventhLord
SeventhLordLv5SeventhLord

The translation quality is actually pretty good. The MC isn't stupid and is slightly paranoid but willing to take risks. Characterization is consistent. Somewhat generic, but it's more like a KR western fantasy than the standard CN western fantasy.

Lovely_Lalibey
Lovely_LalibeyLv4Lovely_Lalibey

Tbh, it started off good and intriguing, with him experimenting and learning more about his powers/vampire identity while still having to deal with the political mess that comes with being reincarnated into a Baron's son. His character gradually didn't become my cup of tea but one thing about him is that he's determined to accomplish his goal no matter the cost. Now, I would be fine with the storyline if at around 130 chapters or so, he didn't choose to cheat. Like he literally keeps a powerful mistress because he wants to use their heir to consolidate his power. That's my bottomline. I was already a bit put off with the FL appearing so early into the story only to not be the only one. He didn't feel an ounce of guilt and First FL is just naive and treated like/is a powerful flower vase in my opinion. I don't want to jump to conclusions, but this is a common trope in male-centered (and authored) novels that annoys me. It's already steering towards a harem for me. I guess I should have read the tags before starting the novel.Only staying for the political plot and more discoveries about his bloodline powers.

MarekV1
MarekV1Lv1MarekV1

Raw pls ?(โ—”โ€ฟโ—”). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

Sylex
SylexLv3Sylex

it's actually good? first time I see a good Chinese novel about western topics, I really hope it will be picked up then some cliche generic novel

Fluffnstuff
FluffnstuffLv14Fluffnstuff

When considering a word to sum up this novel, the word, lame, comes to mind. The initial performance wasn't bad. I had high hopes, but the experience was a letdown. A vampire story that is loaded with political intrigue that isn't intriguing at all. Also, it was filled with super annoying females, and a very slow to develop, and lacking MC. I just don't feel like there is any good climax, and it falls flat. I even looked elsewhere to skim over 100 chapters to see if there is an improvement in the story. Nope, still lots of inept attempts at political intrigue and annoying females. ๐Ÿ˜‘ Not my kind of story.

Lahumn_Harobs
Lahumn_HarobsLv1Lahumn_Harobs

an interesting and intriguing read, quite enjoyable n thrilling. if u are one up for thrills and danger just curl up with this book and be transported to the mersmerizing dangers and fantastic plot of the book

ISuMin
ISuMinLv4ISuMin

It's the most interesting novel of this batch so I hope it will be picked. It's just that in 40 chapters we see a lot of disadvantages of being a vampire, but the only advantage he has is that he is a relatively harder to kill. (+ he can barely raise his knight level through drinking special and difficult to get kind of blood) MC doesn't have any canonical powers, so he can only barely be called a vampire not to mention a progenitor.

Wylden_Bond
Wylden_BondLv15Wylden_Bond

Translation Quality: No complaints. Story Development: My Lord where to begin. Dear Author you have floored me. I am truly impressed and blessed to read a novel with this level of work put into it. 400 pages later I'm here writing this to say thank you before I continue to read. Character Design: Author utilized main and side characters to push the story/narrative in a beautiful way. Twist and turns through the story and the situation they find themselves in cause characters to make serious choices with serious consequences, the plot thickens and the author knows how to keep ones attention. What you may have thought was the death of a important enemy, was merely a illusion the author created to distract you. Updating Stability: I binged 400 pages. I cannot downvote this masterpiece for the authors inability to produce more content. "Yet." I'm greedy and want more Author. Deal with the problem your success has brought you. World Background: Constantly expanding, immersive, wonderfully laid out, my attention grasped tightly. Keep it up and Good luck. I'll update my review at a later date.

Isaac_Hillman
Isaac_HillmanLv4Isaac_Hillman

Reveal spoiler

Vkee_Niy127
Vkee_Niy127Lv12Vkee_Niy127

This is a captivating story where we, as readers, are pulled into a world of fantasy with a healthy dosage of wits and schemes . The characters are multilayered and adequately complex further unveiling ing the plot in a ravishing manner.

Theonethatfapaway
TheonethatfapawayLv4Theonethatfapaway

Is it me or I managed to read this like a year ago

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

best novel i read after Seventh Base a month or two ago i have no flaw to point out in this novel .

Bofhen
BofhenLv15Bofhen

Quite good more so than i thought actually and so i do hope it get picked up so can see if it keeps being good or not But guess the odds are low Vampire novels are not really popular hear it seems or they get Dropt at-least

Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv1Rhongomynaid

A decent read. Acceptable world building, generic but not bland protagonist, side characters with the ability to think a bit, seemingly well thought out power systems and an interesting premise. This could go sideways later on but it's looking fairly promising right now. Despite being a bit basic, this is probably as good as it's going to get on this site. I like the potential, concept, story and worldbuilding because I think they could be rather interesting so this gets a high score. It's always nice when my depressingly low expectations are actually exceeded for once. 3.25/5.

Lxpsy
LxpsyLv15Lxpsy

I have to admi, I am shocked. I didnโ€™t expect that Webnovel would give us such a Gem in a Trial novel. This is a Vampire story in a World which is a Mixture or AGoT and LotR. We have a Human translator and this novel is 9/10

MrNewbie
MrNewbieLv15MrNewbie

So webnovel can also publish good novels?? ajajshsjsjsjsjdbdhsjsnvssidbdbsjsjsjshsjsjjdjdjsjsjsjsjdjdjjsjdndnsjndjdjdjdksjsnnsnsjsjsjjsjsjsj

DaoistqDf33e
DaoistqDf33eLv2DaoistqDf33e

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Givean_HooH
Givean_HooHLv3Givean_HooH

I would love read it.... don't drop it!!!!!!.................................................................................................