Reviews of The First Order
The First Order
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Stable release nice story development good grammer for me at least tehe well some people might have better knowledge at me about grammar so if your that someone dont be angry😊👌I reccomend this novel I hope you enjoy it also I have bad grammar so don't take my word that this will have good grammer😙 'whistles'.
Fk this book, don't ever read or it'll make you rage quit and waste your time. Extremely forced situations that always put MC and his friends in danger. True friends of MC just dies everytime in all of these forced danger situations. If you're looking for something satisfying to read, or how the MC slowly overcomes obstacles and difficulties to get stronger, this book is not for you, because this book just shows how weak the MC is and how he can't protect his friends and family. They just die left and right in a very sudden dangerous situation that happens out of nowhere, and it happens just in time before MC and his friends leave. It's like they have extremely bad luck and disaster follow them around. Just plain torture reading this book man.... Leave before you regret. I assure you, the good reviews are just for the first 200 chapters, after chp200+ is just pure painful torture, please, just don't read this book. I've had enough. Fk this author.
A really interesting start! A System which wants the ruthless MC to be more kind - or to be looked at like that. Apocalypse is always a nice setting and the bromance is strong in this one. I hope it won't devolve into some harem-****... We really have enough of that. Thanks for providing us with such a nice treat, dear author <3
The First Order is a story about Ren Xiasou, a refugee who lives outside the strongholds. He awoke a system that allows him to get some supernatural abilities. He uses this to help him and his little brother survive. This is arguably one of my least favorite novels. I have to admit, I loved the first 400 chapters, I found it very interesting even though it wasn't perfect. However, there might as well not be a story beyond chapter 400, because nothing interesting happens beyond that point. Translation quality is garbage. Theres so many mistakes in every chapter it's ridiculous. Furthermore, the translation randomly changes, sometimes its in all lowercase, sometimes every single word is capitalized. (1/5 stars) Story development. Everything before chapter 400 is a solid 4/5, maybe even a 5/5. However, words cannot describe how garbage the novel is beyond that. It's just this ever constant stream of unimportant information while the main character is trying to "search for" people he knows. The whole assassin arc was stupid as well, we go from the main character taking on thousands of well-trained troops to the main character serving as a bodyguard to some random celebrity and fighting low-level thugs. I find myself skipping entire chapters, and the most I read per chapter at this point is 50 words. The pacing in this novel is really bad as well. Sometimes the main character is fighting an army, other times the novel takes 100 chapters setting up for something absolutely pointless. Upon realizing this, the author tries to make it seem slightly important later on, but it genuinely feels like a afterthought. Power scaling is just as bad. The main character is "overpowered" but not at all. He fights against armies but always seems to be only slightly better than everyone else. This might just be because he never fights with anyone strong, but it remains the same. The system he has is also extremely inconsistent, and recently it's basically forgotten. Early on, it would give him quests that allow him to duplicate people's skills and superpowers. Now, it's basically forgotten. Furthermore, he is extremely stupid with how he uses the skill duplication scrolls. He uses them in the worst possible way, so he has a extremely odd-assortment of skills. Also, I didn't properly explain how much filler there is. Every single time the main character fights, theres a solid three chapters of the main character "overhearing" people praising and talking about him. It's so annoying to read. Last point, this novel is even more repetitious than cultivation novels. The same plot points happen over and over and over. Luo Lan, a friend of the main character, has been saved well over 30 times at this point, and it's downright tedious to read at this point. (1/5 stars, would give it less if I could) Character design is equally awful. Zhou Yingxue, a character that gets introduced after the first 400 chapters, is downright annoying. She is a useless character that only serves as plot armor and comedic relief. The first 400 chapters had good characters, and they only seemed really realistic. This all went out the window after chapter 400, where every single character is annoying. Also, their IQ drops after chapter 400, where despite the main character attempting to look for them, they don't do the same. It is EXTREMELY obvious where the main character is, and they just ignore him? Hello? (1/5 stars) World background is a mess. Honestly, it's probably around 3 stars, but I'm lowering to 1 star just because of how awful the plot dumping is. There is still a ridiculous amount of plot dumping at CHAPTER 600. This information is just abruptly talk about, with barely any interlude. Almost every single thing they talk about as well is super boring, and I find myself just skipping three chapters at a time. Overall, I recommend not reading this novel at all. I would recommend reading the first 400 chapters, but it leaves you on a cliff-hanger so I doubt anyone would be satisfied. Everything beyond chapter 400 is a mess, and I'm questioning why the author thought it would be good. I give this novel 1.0 stars out of 5.
Around chp 200 and so the MC is so fking stupid. They have bikes, more than enough food, guns and superpowers yet they still fking follow other victims, just to get caught by the Lee corporation and become a member of their army? What fking stupid shit is this. They have nothing to write so they just add in fillers. You might say this is a turning point of the story, but it's written in a fking idiotic and stupid way. Fk this stupid story. Don't read. It'll make you go crazy of how stupid the MC is.
I really wanted to like this novel but it lost its charm the more I continued to read . I love the starting of the story but somewhere between Ch 150 - Ch 200 I felt so bored reading it so I stopped . I loved the MC because he had the brains and he acted logically , he knew how to survive and was clever but as the story progressed he started to act like other typical novel MCs . His interaction with Yang Xiaoxin just made me cringe , its just a personal opinion but I find Yang Xiaoxin annoying . The way Ren Xiaosu keeps on dragging Jiang Wu and her students around on his escapes is honestly difficult to read . So its not that I hated the story , it's good but I won't be reading further . If you're thinking of reading it go ahead , it's a great novel ,you might enjoy it :)
the story at the beginning is really good, and interesting. The world building was decent and the mc is smart, and a little bit conniving. Everything is good until later on in the novel where then everything becomes kind of forced. Certain actions just don't make sense. one example of this is the character development of the mc from selfish loner(except his brother) to a somewhat caring and socialable guy. However, even with this change in personality he doesn't help others when it cost him nothing. like giving potatoes from his infinite potato shooter. I'm not saying that the mc should be a saint, but he actually gets benefits from doing this from the system which forces him to do good(sincere thanks helps him unlock OP weapons). The system itself just seem to stop working later on after the mc copy enough abilities and just doesn't trigger quests that much. Some situations are written in a forced way to make the mc act in a certain direction, which to me ruins the emersion of the novel. Even with these flaws I feel that this is a decent novel compared to others on this site, so check it out if you want.
Author i read until the end of the sorrows of our era (chpt 370)...i really enjoy overall this book but WHY....WHY do you have to push the story by making the stupid...in earlier chapters he was thinking before he did **** he had a thought process...and now he loses it at the most critical moment for no reason...he ignores all signs of danger he doesnt use the s****w for battle but his own body ...i dont understand why do you rush things Ren's purpose was to get stronger so he can protect his brother when did all that gone to ****? He doesnt even try to power up the last 50chapters...you can write a great story...step back and LET THE CHARACTERS BREATHE!!!
honestly it was one of best in starting bcoz of its unique mc with good humour , being logical , no simpness and dark type mc above that who really understands importance of k owledge . It was honestly good novel in starting but gstarted going downhill like many ither chinese novel bcoz of many same reason as others like illogical crap , firced wrting , forced situations to make mc hype more ,and then that forced romance shit honestly .from the the moment romance shit i mean Fmc was introduced he stopped being the mche was in starting . became a total simp . and many things started get illogical honestly . many things are forced justifyied also . It us a story for ppl who foolow blindly any shit aithors put , and any shit mc does. and yeah those Ship lover also will like this crap .