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The Final Act

Saeven07

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Saeven07
Saeven07AuthorSaeven07

Author here! I just found out that I can review my own book lol so here's a shameless review! This is a fun book to read, I know because I have fun writing it. And though it may not be perfect yet (as nothing is or will ever be), I hope you give this book a chance. I love theatre and Broadway so much that I just thought "what if...?" and I think that in itself is interesting. To those who are supporting it, thank you very much! I really appreciate it. That's all, All the love xx Jan

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YawningBrain
YawningBrainLv13YawningBrain

I had to say that it is totally worth reading. I am just hooked with the plot and the characters. It is a refreshing story, very captivating to read. I seriously like the Main Character, her background, her inner thoughts, and struggles within her new group of special friends and the ML. The flow of the story has a good pace and the narrative and descriptions are fascinating, I was seriously loving many paragraphs. And last but not least, Congratulations on WFP #11, definitely worthy. Keep on the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]

Daisy_T
Daisy_TLv4Daisy_T

5 STARS!! ⭐✨ This is gold, a treasure, an amazing treasure. Definitely worthy of winning WFP #11. The story right from the very beginning draws you into the MC's world and lets you know exactly how she's feeling. How she's torn between obligation and finding her true self. I love how the descriptions are so unique and explicit. The comedy is goldπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. I totally love Evelina thoughπŸ’œ, as wicked as she's supposed to be she has wayy too many good sides to her. And West....sigh my heartπŸ˜ͺπŸ’œ. I'll leave it at that but seriously this is a MUST HAVE. Add it to your library and love #WESTLINA with me, pretty please.....πŸ’œβœ¨

Thereviewer48
Thereviewer48Lv1Thereviewer48

Writing Qaulity: 3/5 There were mistakes and weird wording that caused me to be confused on a few paragraphs that I had to reread them. Updated Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone. Story Development: 4/5 Pacing is good, although some scenes had me lost (or that could just be me). Character Design: 5/5 Your characters are well-written, I like their personalities. World Background: 4/5 Good and descriptive. You let people know what to expect in the story whole your first chapter got them interested.

Aella_Stormwind
Aella_StormwindLv13Aella_Stormwind

I am absolutely loving this story so far! The characters are three dimensional and really well fleshed out. The pacing of the story goes along smoothly, and the scenes flow nicely. The descriptions are vivid and visceral. I really feel for the characters, especially Evelina. Looking forward to seeing what comes next from this author, great job! Would highly recommend to anyone looking for an intriguing read.

Onyourhead
OnyourheadLv10Onyourhead

Off the top of my head the first thing I thought when I began reading was that the Synopsis and perhaps the book cover does do the story itself justice! In fact the story itself is wonderful the world background is very different and is applied well to the story as in that it’s very well described. In fact all of what’s written, is written perfectly well. No problems with spelling or grammar. Though I’ve read this type of novel before, it hasn’t been for a while. Let’s say it’s no wonder you got gold! I think you’ve made your fantasy world and all of its laws very interesting and thankfully not stereotypical. I just hope you continue to post more chapters because your novel is really fantastic!

moonmato
moonmatoLv1moonmato

Interesting plot and characterization!! This book is going to be one of my faves πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί I love how you describe each acts, it's admirable. Keep up the good work, bub!

EmpRabbit
EmpRabbitLv13EmpRabbit

I love this type of stories. The quality of your writing can be easily seen in your good descriptions and the amazing dialogue between characters which keeps the reader hooked on this book. The background is set up well and the characters have been placed perfectly. Well done, author!

SnowPenguin
SnowPenguinLv3SnowPenguin

The story is well written and well paced with interesting and well defined characters. The setting is also really cool, especially with how the story starts out in the beginning and there's a fair bit of tension there between the characters as well.

IzannahFrame
IzannahFrameLv3IzannahFrame

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Elise_Aigasaki
Elise_AigasakiLv3Elise_Aigasaki

I definitely love it~ It's good how you describe each part, the way it was written was excellent! I'm curious about the next chapters, so I do need more updates, but take your time, author! No pressure~

Nachetanya_Akira
Nachetanya_AkiraLv3Nachetanya_Akira

I guess I am the first one here but don't worry there will be many more people who will review your story, It's a good story and I was thrilled because of the vampire things, Just hoping you can upload more updates and add more chapters, In general your story is good and I highly respect you now author[img=recommend][img=update]

Burlesque_Dancer
Burlesque_DancerLv5Burlesque_Dancer

I really love this book. It's so good. It's written so well and the style is so cool. I love the development of every aspect of this. It's also a unique plot

Twwieneis
TwwieneisLv4Twwieneis

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swatiikakkr
swatiikakkrLv4swatiikakkr

a completely worth reading story line,makes u completely hooked up to itself.....nicely described characters. ...a vry good work by author so far

Anyanwu_Christy_6579
Anyanwu_Christy_6579Lv4Anyanwu_Christy_6579

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Ervs
ErvsLv6Ervs

Fun time πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– fun time πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™ fun tjme πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ fun time β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ fun time πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š fun time

Cindy_Daschel
Cindy_DaschelLv10Cindy_Daschel

This book is a fun read and a hoot to boot! I wish I could read it all day straight. I can't wait every night to read it. Don't worry. I won't give anything away.

Pacesetter
PacesetterLv6Pacesetter

What a refreshing story to read. Thanks author for creating a story that isn't just about story telling but also gives vivid details and explained interestingly to keep the readers waiting for more, with the emotions of the female lead.

Burlesque_Dancer
Burlesque_DancerLv5Burlesque_Dancer

best book! it's awesomely written. I'm addicted to the characters and their story. I have no idea what's gonna happen and how the impossible love is going to unfold but I'm excited.