Reviews of The Female lead is a Lesbian
The Female lead is a Lesbian
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It's not everyday you see a story like this. The female lead instead of winning a Male lead over she is lesbian and wants to get away from the guy. It already sounds super interesting.
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Okay, I don't know how to start with this... First of all the concept is unique, definitely not new, but it is a very unique concept. Unfortunately, from what I read and observed from the story is, that the realism is definitely not an aspect that's very prominent, everything happens too fast, and it's very straight forward but for me the pacing is too fast, the details on the characters aren't very fleshed out, from what I read. The side characters seemed too unrealistic and very unlikeable, the MC and FL as far, as I can describe we're decent? For me I feel like the FL just popped out of nowhere, there was no hints, no past relation and felt fake. I mean who just pop out of no where just cause a woman you don't even know want to commit suicide, I get that it's fiction but the way the FL was introduced, was sudden and it really felt unnatural. Also the word "feminist" always rubbed me the wrong way, Im NOT a hater for feminist, but they have a reputation for hating on the opposite gender :/ The way men were described here were just horrible, not every man has a cheating, cheap, sex driven, money and fame hungry personality. If the FL really advocate for equality, then please do not describe men as a typical hentai character. I have not read that far yet, but the feel of the story feels unrealistic and cliche, but the story has a very unique concept. Again I don't hate you Author, in fact I still like the story but the way it was presented could have been better. Also the typos and punctuation, comma, spelling sometimes we're a bit off, I'm not a grammar person but I did notice it. I will still support the story. Please continue the story. thank you. Also every story, for me is always unique in its own way :)
Rant: I started reading this expecting to love it. What's better than a badass lesbian? However, I found that the writing was sorely lacking. For instance, in chapter 4, you see a doctor checking in on his patient. You are then immediately told that this doctor is a disgusting rapist and that the nurse is a crazy killer. And the MC knew this by his voice???? Everything was so abrupt and random. It was like the author thought "Hmmm what are some of the most disgusting and vile things a human can do, and then tell the reader that they did them without any warning, so the reader will HATE these characters and cheer for the heroin." I couldn't be invested in this story at all because there was so little imagination and build to the plot. And I found myself barely able to understand the story do to poor writing skills. I know what it's like to be a young author and to not have much experience and that it's very hard to write. Personally, it was hard to comprehend what was happening. (On that note, the pacing was non-existent). There was so little that made me want to feel anything for these characters because they didn't seem to hold any depth to them what so ever. I think it's a nice idea but the execution was not it. -I know this rant might be all over the place, I am just really disappointed. I REALLY wanted to like this, but I could barely read it :(
I really like this novel pls dont drop it😊👌, FL is a badass that wouldnt be under her husbands crotch unlike other novels out there for once there's actually someone who wrote something like this no idiot FL who would pe pushed down by an abusive husband the cliche story line of having an overbearing handsome ML fuck that do your thing pls dont copy those retarded stories.
In all honesty, I admire you girl. You have such a creative and delicate breath and your story had me hooked with the first chapter. I quite honestly can't thank you enough for uploading your work. I really can't wait for the next chapter comes out and then some... Without further ado, you are awesome, love the story, keep up the great work. And I am glad to be reading your work. Also, I'm not being a kiss-as* 😗, I'm just stating my opinion in review. I don't know the update schedule, but I hope the book doesn't end soon. Hmm. Cheers!!
I really like this story and I’m glad the author is editing it and fixing their mistakes. But it's really good, there's an unexpected twist ever turn and the protagonist and her friends are the most savage people ever! The characters also seem to deepen and the imagery and grammar has improved immensely! So I would say give it a chance maybe after the editing if you have a problem with errors but still, it's still pretty awesome.
Ok so this book is one of the few I read. It’s funny it's got nice characters and even though I prefer it not to be in an anime setting I still love it. The grammar needs to be fixed and so do the spelling in some chapters. But I have seen worse. I also love where the story is going and how it gets better and better as it goes on.
