The Fastest Man Alive - Marvel

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I Read quite a lot of chapters and it feel like Captain Marvel movie as a tenage guy with very worse control on hormones but then again it's wish fulfillment story not by some strating writer so don't expect much if he disrespect one of your favourite character

Doormat for every female

This is my initial review from reading a bit of the first chapter. I noticed some problems very common particularly among new authors. I'll make a list and explain some of it. *cringe dialogues *unnecessary info dumps *questionable time skips Cringe Dialogues. I find it really hard to read cringe dialogues, it makes the flow of conversation between characters seem unnatural. I think if you'll be the one talking to these characters you'll see this problem too. Unnecessary Info Dump. I understand the need of creating a good world background or world building, but giving too much would defeat the purpose of 'good' in it. Less would make it confusing, being concise would do it. Questionable Time-skip. Huge as* time skipping wouldn't make the story go faster. Doing it makes a lot of plotholes and the need of info dumps in the future. So it's best if give some brief summary of the activities (for the day/month/year) and skip the heck out it. I feel the need to give this review cuz a lot of people in the Webnovel Community are idiot or just some hatin' as* jerk you'll find commonly in the Internet. New bloods like you are the fuel for the community. I hope this will help you improve, even though most of this is just me ranting.

Review should be more than 40 characters - but this isn’t really worth the effort. Could have been great but the characters kill the story here.

it was good but suddenly novel became full KingdomBuilding. 0 action, actually 0 KingdomBuilding =D. AT just make it seem like it is but nope... My advice read 20+ chapters, then drop

Well, what can i say... the story is not baaaad, but it's not good. The story has 0 development for secondary characters, i know it's a FF but you at least have to make some effort so it makes sense for the secondary act at a certain way with the protagonist, feels like you have a stair, and then you jumped straight to the top of her, jumping all the way. The protagonist is too inconsistent, sometimes he is confident and cold, sometimes he acts like a teenage like when he meet Raven for the first time, that was really cringe. The dialog is really bad, but this is the author's first novel so i can see he getting better. Author spend to much time explaining Flash power and how it works, we already know that dude, no need to make an entire chapter just to explain it, there's always a google. As i said, the story started really rushed, like the athor didn't wanted to start Mc's romance from the beginning. When the story started the Mc already had everything he would need to have power, and them 'boof' he is an omega level just like, that was too easy, but that was my personal opnion since i would enjoy more to see the protagonist own what he got. The good thing is that the chapters are really big.

Ok I just finished chapter 13 and i think i've figured about the by pace and direction of the book so here's my review: 1. The mc is a mix of Stark and Reed Richard's with comic book knowledge, he is implusive, a playboy, loyal as fuk, and doesn't think much of consequences of his actions. 2. The author's portray of family and friends interaction is 'realistic' so for all those xanxia, wuxia readers and basically all those immature and psychotic and in between this is not for you, he cares for his family and friends and so does his family and friends so he listens to them and doesn't act all psychotic. 3. The story development is good and really amazing take of speed force to marvel 4. Like i said mc doesn't think much of consequences so there are a lot of frustrating acts that he did and ends up regretting and again his family and friends help him out. So all in all a super massive 9/10 score for this novel. And if the author is reading this, ignore the negativity, they are just little dipshits, your portrayal makes it easy to fantasize ourselves as the mc.

I'm not used to writing reviews but this was too much!! too much irrelevant content, a supposedly intelligent mc yet so stupid in short the story had good latent potential but the author introduced too much of his personal fantasy to the detriment of logic.

nem tente ler isso cara, só vai lhe dar dor de cabeça..... ............................. ............................................

I was expecting an anti hero and blood shed it isn't.I was slightly disappointed it wasn't about that but it's still great, character has unique personality and ways of thinking and the chapters are so clear it's like watching a movie in your mind

Happy that it will not be droo great story and writing also like how it's not about saving strangers who mean nothing to you but about help your friends and family

Nice long chapters and one of the few good examples of a harem. The characters were well written and carry their own personalities instead of being mindless drones in the background instantly falling inline with the hero.

I love the story keep going and do the awesome work 👏👏👏👍👍😄😄😎.And i am all for the Harem .You have my support and my gratitude for this awesome story

I have been waiting for a speed force user in marvel to be written. So far I'm hooked on this story. I am waiting with anticipation for more ch. updates.

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Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem. Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem. Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem.

honestly it's meh... I don't like the MC though.. The story just makes the MC get involved in almost anything marvel just cause he's got "plans" I mean come on being a speedster and one with the speedforce can cover pretty much anything. It does not have originality the MC is dumb and blames hormones

Great story. I wish there were more stories like this. I hope you don't give it up. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

this story is great its just fun for me but the comments section is cursed af people don't know the meaning of respect. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀