Reviews of The False Hero (Book 1 of the Semisaur Chronicles)

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I really loved the writing skills used for this novel. It was really interesting. Maybe one day in the near future, this novel could be the next addition to the Jurassic series! Keep up the good work!

This is very well written, I am sure it will get even better through time. I am really excited to see what comes out next chapter! I am starting to have my own theories, but still will be waiting eagerly for this!

It's really a good work author. While reading I was imagining as if I was a student there and every incident is portrayed in front of me. Keep it up author for getting the success. And All the Best for your upcoming chapters.

Love it so far. The kids are believable, teacher seems like a decent guy, and I'm excited to meet the first dinosaur. Eagerly awaiting next chapter.

When you've been looking for a good story featuring dinosaurs for most of your life but you finally find one. I have already started to speculate what that little dinosaur at the end was.

A great story so far! I'm very excited to see what comes next in the book. Its amazingly written and truly feels like a movie in my head! I would definitely recommend giving this a read!

The author portrays students in a realistic way, and has a great use of character development and setting. The story transports you to a small science classroom and makes you visualize a teacher with greying hair and dimming eyes trying his best to engage his students. The capitalization and variety of sentence lengths and types is simply amazing. I can tell this story is going to awe many people and I can't wait to read the next chapter! (Also go follow this author on Insta @dinotoycomics he deserves it!)

It’s a great book, super original and I have never seen anything like it before, and super well written too, I could see it like a movie in my head, and that’s just the first chapter lol

It's a great and entertaining story. I am enamored by it. Hope this gets more popular. More people need to read this. This book would be an interesting way to get people interested in palaeontology.👍🏼

Very nice written, the introduction to the plot is very subtle and it is easy to emphasize with the characters. The dinosaur description, although it hasn't been very extensive, is very accurate and up-to-date. I love the fact that the names of some characters are the ones of some of the earliest paleontologists, great hint!

Man I love this book! You know the moment when you read the first page and suddenly you just got hooked, yeah well that happened😄. Its really hard to find really good stories these days. This is really good! There are no grammar mistakes the sentence structure is awesome and not confusing. I just can't wait for the next chapters!!

I loved the first two chapters, the third did not disappoint, the same characters and great story telling was there like the other two, the mystery that keeps growing and makes it more intense, I absolutely love this.

I love this book. It gets you hooked on the first page. I’m only a few pages in, but I already love it. It’s easy to follow, and the story jumps right in.

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW I came across this story while searching for dinosaur fiction on Webnovel and WOW WOW. The other reviews talking about the first chapter seeming like a movie in your head are on point. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Judging from the synopsis, I guess Gregory Buckland is the hero? He reminds me of my own self... can't wait to see him grow! Thanks, author, for writing a story about someone whom I can see as an alter ego of myself.

The story is definitely encapsulating. The pace is slow enough to get into, and the twist at the end is well placed. The blue bird which I'm sure is a dinosaur is a nice inclusion as well. But now I'd like to talk about the lackings. The dialogues do not seem very organic, in which I mean to say that the way in which some of the kids are talking isn't at all how kids talk. For example at the point where the two kids keep calling each other idiots, the writer uses the word "you are". Talking is supposed to flow smoothly of one's mouths especially when the talkers are kids rather than literature teachers from Harvard. So I'd think they would say their lines smoothly like - "Shut up BRO, you're an idiot!" "Oh yeah?! You're the bigger one! Also I noticed the lack of synonyms. So maybe consider using Thesaurus when you write the next chapter. My overall verdict is that the story and pacing is good, but there are a few grammar errors that are a bit too hard to overlook once noticed.

Loving the story uptill now and really like this kind of fresh idea and I really hope you will continue in a similar fashion with this novel's upcoming chapters.

I loved this, I think it has lots of potential in sequels and all that, the mystery is great as well as the characters, I loved all of it. I’m sure to be there when the final book is released and sure it will be a household classic.

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