Reviews of The Fallen God Immortal

Ok so this is Yeng Sensei, ahhhhhhhhhhh English as second language... First time writing novel lmfao Grammar is the worst for me <3 Hope you enjoy! Feedback to me so I can improve more! Thanks.

There’s only one chapter out but it seems interesting, Lets see how much talent and potential a kid will have when he’s born from a fruit of heaven and the reincarnation of an immortal

don't mean to bring your story down, but it's been a month since you updated!!! For writing quality, I couldn't give it a 4.5(sadness), but it's just small grammar mistakes. Aside from that, this story's really interesting! For the scene of when the uncle dies, give a small paragraph of how much he means to Yeng, and a description of the fight a little more as well as the features of the assignments. You kind of just shoved his death into my face suddenly and made the scene escalate too fast...but's that it. Everything else is AMAZING! love this story so far!!! -screaming to the world in the background-