Fujiashi
Hello, this is the author! This is my first novel in WN and I know I still lack lots of things but I am striving to improve and for that, I need the readers' help. I appreciate honest reviews and even harsh ones. I'm still a beginner and English isn't my first language so I might make tons of mistakes, please forgive me for that. (;ŏ﹏ŏ)
So here goes... I did count several spelling mistakes though not too bad, but they didn't necessarily hinder the flow of the Novel. I found that this plot is quite similar to mine so I was really interested. Overall, I think the author did a good job in conveying emotions and dialogue. Good job, you!