Reviews of The Eyes of Death

Wait I'm honestly shook by all of the descriptions that you had. I know it's only been the first chapters, so I can't say I'm really hooked? All I know is that this writing (skill-wise) is probably the best I've seen here and just really beautiful to read. Not going to lie, I know nothing about African mythology and was sort of confused by all of the descriptions and such that you packed into the first chapter. But honestly, after reading the first chapter, I'm totally willing to read more and learn more about it (hence why it's in my library now lol). I think the only part where I was a bit critical was that the chapter title pretty much gave away what was going to happen in the chapter? Anyways, good luck!!!

Good job on making an amazing novel! Don't stop and don't be discourage for i will read your updates in the future And also 5 stars on writing quality

Your story opening is superb. The author really pays attention to the character set and from the story you can imagine an epic story about the gods.