miwaknight
Wanna know how a story is good or not? Read the first chapter, find yourself amazed, and - almost instantaneously - rate it five stars. And boy oh boy, did this deserve it's 5 stars. There's no actual easy to explain it (so read it!) but there's this certain style of writing the author uses that harkens back to Tolkien's works while simultaneously giving a chill like Stephen King's works. No, I'm not joking, that's literally what I felt when I read this. And trust me, I would know, cause the very first novel I read, was The Fellowship of the Ring (I know, I was 9 and the movie came out, you sure as hell bet I was gonna read it) and the second fantasy series that I read, which was the first two Dark Tower books. The way the author described the nightly city as a slumbering bruin was reminiscent to Tolkien's work, while the description of the Nightwalkers was similar the King's. And don't get me started on grammar, there were no errors at all. Even if there were, I didn't pick it up till my second read cause I was too immersed in the story. I think the only thing that could lower the overall rating of the novel, is that there are sooo few chapters. I'm at chapter 2, but I don't want to continue reading, not when I know there's only about 3 more chapters after that. So, I'm going to keep this in my collection, and read it only after a dozen or so more chapters are released. Otherwise, I will lose a few hours of sleep wondering what will happen next to the characters.
OMG--I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. YOU'VE UPDATED ONLY 4 CHAPTERS BUT OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I can express in words how amazing this book is. The writing, the suspense, the setting, the characters and the emotions this book brings out is just so amazing. Damn I'm really looking forward for the future chapters. Keep doing great author! You're going places!
Wow. Just reading the synopsis I was already hooked. Reading the initial chapter, I was brought to the scene as if I was watching from a movie ☺️ I love the characters, they have a distinct quality and personality in them. I'm already shipping the friendship and I'm staying tuned. Highly recommended for a good read! ♥️
This is really good. I read the first chapter and I was already interested in the book. Your writing prowess is just god tier. The world building is amazing, characters are lovely, and plot is building up. I had to stop at chapter 4, cause ending on a cliffhanger is annoying. I can't wait for your next update. Please keep up the good work author!!