Reviews of The Eye Of The Moon Plan
The Eye Of The Moon Plan
Legendary_Person
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I have read till chapter 23 and it is simply FANTASTIC an awesome story with an even impressive character The character has an aura of mystery (thanks to various secrets of him we know nothing about) he is calm and is a cool mc The story is not a stupid wish fulfilment one as IT HAS ORIGINALITY (which is usually lacking in most Fanfics ) Mc is older than tatsuya So we can be sure he is not going to become some Lackey or a part of his friends *ahem* subordinates *ahem* Anyway writting quality is pretty good and the grammar is perfect So no issues on writing end I think 4 updates a week are pretty decent . Though as a greedy person that I am I am nit satisfied with it Author explains basic stuff which helps as I read the novel long time back Now here is a tiny tiny spoiler u can ignore it Author mentions somewhere that mc would leave this world . Now this is my question/request to the author to tell me if he is going to other world and .if he is then , is he going to take his wife with him because I am a fan of mild romance in action and am not very amused by the idea of leaving ur loved ones behind That being said, it is but a speculation which I wanted to clarify ... Anyway the author is doing a great job and I hope he doesn't get influenced by other people views , ultimately being unsatisfied by his own novel and then leaving it ... I can't imagine such a novel being left 😭 in middle of writing U Hv my support and of course my power stones. I am Still a minor So nothing on patreon end (if u hv one) for now ...Sorry and THANKS Keep updating
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I will skip through the usual pleasantries as this review is more like a complaint than anything else, a complaint to the author that seems he's hellbent on adding flaws to his own masterpiece. As you can see everything up there are 5 stars as everything is perfect, no typos, perfect character development, and design, perfect background description. Nothing to say here. My issues are the following... Why the hell are there so few romantic scenes with Mayumi... There is a lot of contradiction regarding what exactly does this novel represents. Sometimes, it is very serious, sometimes it has comedy, sometimes it has romance and sometimes I don't know, that in itself is not the problem as a book usually has all that. The problem is that they are not being properly merged together. Sometimes a situation that should be serious turns comedic thus taking out some impact from it. Sometimes, situations that should be romantic turn serious or comedic, also taking out the impact of the romance. It is frustrating that other pairings in this novel have more moments or development than the main pairing that is MC and Mayumi. Look and learn author, you can have many pairings in a novel, but you can never show more development than necessary with the secondary pairings. You can show that there is development for example that Erika is flushing in front of Leo or something like that, indicating that there might be some relationship between them in the future or them mentioning that they're going on a date, and then show the conclusion of the date. But no one fking cares about the date itself! Bro I swear, that date between the Chiba guy and Kyoko I was like: 'Okay, they are in a relationship, and talking about their future is normal' 'Okay, she made a rather bold and sultry remark there but I guess it can be expected for a couple' 'Why the hell are you showing me the lemon!!!!'*skips lemon* 'Why the hell are you showing me the after taste!!!!!!!!!!'*skips after taste* I mean for real you only do that in these cases: Either you're planning to make a Netori scenario where MC steals her or... I don't know as nobody fking cares about them, especially when they were introduced like 5 chapters ago. So please, even Naotsugu and Mari have more moments than Mayumi and MC. I would have been more interested in an MC x Miya situation than that unsettling scene you showed. Keep a proper flow, if the novel is serious, keep it serious. If it is funny, then keep it funny. Best Regards.
This fanfic is pretty good, the biggest problem i have with it is that it just throws you right into it, no prologue detailing his ordinary life and death, just shows him already established in the world. This is not that big of a problem, other than the fact that it seriously threw me for a few minutes as I kept switching from the story to synopsis. To anyone who wants to read this, do beware of that fact.
Great Novel Man. This novel shows some of the dark sides of the Irregular At Magic Highschool world and I absolutely love it. His ideals & philosophy are amazing and the way he goes about it is just excellent. I love his character design, his family background, & his pairing. I hope you don't drop this novel, I personally think this is your best work. Keep it up.
This fanfic that the author has written is very entertaining and engaging. I would say many novels created on Webnovel lack that. I honestly binge read the up until the latest chapter from start to finish. The grammar usage was great and words were properly capitalized and unclear points of the story were clarified. Overall one of the best reads in awhile for me. I hope that whoever reads this gives it a great chance.
