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Review after chapter 88 I've read this despite all the bad reviews of this novel. And I've got to say that this is an interesting story. The volume 1 is too bland. There's no character development and world building. He's the only character in the whole volume. The others are just extras that he killed. I think that most people got bored and didn't pass through volume 1. I think you can skip volume 1 and start with chapter 20. It will not affect your reading. The volume 2 is the start where a lot of characters appear and the world is slowly forming. The world is too large and we currently couldn't explore it because he's staying in one city. We're currently in chapter 88 and I've got to say that there's a lot of things that will happen in this story considering what explained in the last arc. 88 chapters weren't enough to decide this story like those other novels. Maybe, this wasn't even ten percent of the novel. The only downside of this story was the poor grammar.
Hello Author here! First, I would like to say that I don't have much vocabulary. I'm still an ******* and my grades in English subj were lower than you could have imagined. So some words kept repeating but I guarantee you that I've already planned this whole story. I've already had all that Arcs and the Ending in my notebook(I've wrote it there at the back of my math notebook). I think for for those people who like reading adventures and action will like my novel. This will be a full action story... Probably... Hais... I don't know what I was saying anymore. Well, thanks for reading and I will accept all the criticism with open arms. Good luck! I hope you enjoy it! I truly truly hope that you enjoy it, no, I wish that you enjoy it.
An embarrassing school slice-of-life power fantasy. Emotional age of whoever wrote this is around 12. It actually started out okay, but later it regressed more and more. Oh and of course MC always "smiles", every little thing he does is done with a smile. Quite stupid and creepy. How much trouble is it to write less awkwardly?
This story has a mc that doesn't link to being a goblin, there is no real background created, the writing is quite bad, just the addition of a better translator could make the story more enjoyable, the story has been rather haphazardly put together and I can't say if it's the world or the characters, but it just isn't good enough. On the positive side, there is a non-human mc which is quite different and interesting. So I would recommend this if the writing get corrected alot, but not at the moment.π
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Read up to chapter 16 From what I read it's pretty uninteresting with it not really explaining anything like the main character goblin boy, he's so boring and all that's done is fighting and it's not even fun nor interesting, The main focus is stats and evolving but even that is done poorly. The dungeon sounds lame with pretty poor world building and the protagonists background is pretty boring he's the BEST player in the game because... he got lucky with a broken item yeet Also I think I would've kept reading but fate and prophecy showed up and I hate those. Maybe it gets better as you go on who knows Summary: a pretty boring novel that shoves you along
Just as the author himself already stated, his English isn't very good... Especially his awful grammar makes it hard to enjoy this novel. Having an capable editor would instantly improve my rating of this novel. I am at chapter 69 and so far this novels seems to be a nice copy-mix of the standard transmigration/system/evolving monster/magical academy novels. You won't find much novelty here, but at least it's a solid mix of well known and liked themes. There have been some stupid clichΓ© encounters and scenarios, but I still hope, that it won't go out of hand. If you are bored and don't mind ignoring bad grammar, this novel is recommendable.
Well I have to say the story development if fine, if not good, but your lacking in some parts (mostly grammar). Some of things you need to fix is grammar, world building, and character design in that order. I like the goblin stuff, but Iβve read stories like it (re:monster). The best part about this novel is the stability of updates, but after you finish the story that wouldnβt matter anymore, so I would have to rate it lower. But, overall itβs an alright read not bad but not good either just in between. P.S: Author if you are reading this please find an editor or a fan willing to correct the mistakes in the story
Uninspired and the systematical abuse of the english language doesn't make it any more readable. MC doesn't reincarnate as much as gets perma-logged into a goblin body. Attempts at explaining the game world makes it just more confusing as dimensions are not the authors strong suit. Stats are there just for the number to go up and seem to be arbitrarily infinite or completely gone depending on the situation, no feel whatsoever for any aspect of reality in this novel
Love the story and mystery aspect of the novel. The characters seem well fleshed out and unique. The World building is probably my favourite part of the novel. With the many nations, continents and characters it really makes for an interesting story. The gaming quirks are also nice. The only downside would be the grammar but it's easy to understand and doesn't affect the story. I love this novel so make sure to keep updating it!!