8thGradeSyndrome
I love the synopsis! How I wish this was written in the third person though. Anyway, here's my initial review for the potential of your story. Hoping to read it once it's completed and polished. Cheers! Can you also please drop a review for my work? WAR GROUNDS (the all caps version please). Thanks!
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Its generic popcorn fantasy. I will say this though, it is a good read. Popcorn might be unfulfilling and over all empty calories but it is tasty. And that's what this novel is harmless fun. it may have cut off and I haven't read further but from what I've read it's done the setup well for a novel. It hasn't rushed anything and the story pacing is executed well. It's a good read that great if you got some free time with nothing better to do. It won't harm you and it craves an itch for traditional pulp fantasy story's. Ignore the score, because the measurements on this site are poorly designed. Worth A Read.
I gave 5 stars because.... Haha, idk maybe I'm hooked w the concept and I don't really mind some writers mistakes such as grammars, etc... It's refreshing, specially today that we is infiltrated by lots of +18/harem thingy I'm not against it but it's pretty boring w so many of them.. The author is very promising... Thank you for sharing this and I hope you keep on working on this work piece. More powers author-san, keep safe, continue writing on your own pace there's no rush, good book needs a lot of time.. God bless. :D
Interesting. You have a very good plot, I'm all in for action and fantasy and this type of book is something that really makes readers intrigued. There are just some points I'd like to address. You could use an editing app for your grammar mistakes. It can be improved through time and a little bit of editing could already go a long way. You're in the right track, keep it up and good job, author!
A good book! I really like it but too bad it's not in the 3rd perspective. Nevertheless, I like it. Wish, the author updates fast 'cause I am eager to read more from this book. There might be some wrong tenses, punctuations, or maybe wrong spelling of words, but it can easily be fixed by proofreading. Continue the good work author!!!
I was drawn in by the synopsis. Well-written, and despite there being a few spelling errors here and there, I was still able to completely understand what the author was trying to convey. Well done! As a side note, I would suggest installing a browser extension to help you with grammar and spelling while writing. Grammarly and ProWritingAid are both good ones. Best of luck to your novel, author!