Lythiel
To say the least, the novel is great and is very artistic with its choice of words. I can tell that the author had experience with writing and whatnot, and the character design is above average. Just reading it, I can see the pain the mc is probably going to go through. Story Development and World Background aren't much, but that is only because this is the first episode. To the author, great job, from one author to another :)
It is both a privelage and a delight to be one of the first to discover this incredible new talent! The Empress of Ma'redai has the potential to become a best selling novel. While this is obviously an unedited draft, (typos, etc) the quality of the writing is fantastic. I am hooked, and find myself mildly irritated that I have to wait for more chapters. Wonderful offering!
Obviously a bit of a biased review, since I did write it. The story follows Audrias path to becoming an asset for a theocracy country that is to blame for the downfall of her own country. It starts out as epic adventure but love plays a strong role in the story later on. I love the story, which is why I am writing it :D