Reviews of The Elementals

Great work! loved the plot and was very unique. Very descriptive keep updating! Cole was my favorite character, a underdog protagonist and has a bubbly personality. Hats off to the author!

I liked the story! It's fun and new with appropriate humour. The fantasy is interesting and it was nice to read the chapters. Good job!

Wow. The plot is unique and the characters are funny. The plot is exciting and tense, and the cliffhangers are great. Could have made the chapters a bit longer, but for a website it's fine. Keep it up.

The plot is interesting and the character designs are splendid. Your story has a very steady flow. The humour is well balanced with the other aspects of the story and I think that's amazing. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more!

Excellent! All I wanna say is, the storyline is amazing and the characters are very well organised. The end of chapter 13 got me wanting for more. I can't wait for the next part. Awesome work!

The story takes off with some great comedy and a dose of adventure. Robin is fun to read about and the reveal of the Elemental powers seems completely natural. Looking forward to reading the rest!

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The story looks interesting. Could have given the main characters a bit more of background development. The fantasy elements are intriguing. Looking forward to read the upcoming chapters.

The thing which I really look forward to in this novel is development. In my personal opinion, any and every story has the potential of becoming an artwork and this is one of those stories. What you need to improve on is detailing everything a little such as the characters, the monsters, the world and the story background, and when you do that this novel will mature very well. Tip: Imagine more with more intensity. Looking forward to the growth.

Wow. The author updated the story quite a bit, and I really really like it. There's definitely a bunch of loose ends that were tied, and I can tell that the author really worked hard on revising those chapters. Good job!