Joseph_Tustian
So far, the only thing I could see in this novel is future development. I found a tiny bit of unimportant grammatic errors. I find it unnecessary because the writing style of our author, Joseph, is incredible. Your eyes avert the mistakes into the intriguing plot of the story. The introduction chapter was just astonishing, and the synopsis was sufficient to intrigue people. If the author commissions a catchy book cover, this novel could do a lot more than its current status. I see a lot of potential and effort from the author and would gladly recommend this to everyone. Mind what's inside the story, not what's outside. That's everything I can say. So may fate lead this story to greatness.