Somewhat important chapter

Hi I'm author-San and I don't know what to do sometimes so your comments will really help. So if there is anything in the story that you think I did wrong please let me know and I'm apologizing in advance if I don't post regularly, because I'm in high school and I daydream way to much. This is also the first story I'm writing so criticism is important, but don't be too mean. The chapters might not be that long.