The Deceitful One

Hay pandas what would it take to get you to pick up this book again name a price ???!! 😋😋

good book better than the other highly rated garbage out there you've probably come across give it a try it won't kill you... probably.

It's quite a good story, I only read 20 chapters. But, I recommend you to read this novel immediately, if you love Mr. Fool's mysterious journey.

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This story is the best I have ever read. it doesn't have that mc reigns in almost everything at least.mc indestructible and invincible stuff; genius in all. The chap 193 was really touching

I love the emotional side of this novel.

This one heavily reminds me of The Lord of the mysteries. That is all y'all need to know that this one is good.

Wow, this is a good ln. The trascendent path are explained very well. The mc is not an idiot

It's a new novel but it has potential to rise on the top. I have only read first few chapters so don't have much to say about world building but the characters and the writing quality. The protagonist Bryan is pretty well done with a good background story and motivation that makes sense. Writing quality is also pretty good. (much better than many wn.) Overall, it is highly recommended. :)

Being a fan of detective books this came as no surprise to me that I loved reading this one. The story is well thought out and neatly written. The grammar is impeccable and the characters are well-planned and one can feel their emotions and situations. The character of Bryan takes you deep into the renaissance era, that's exactly the period where this story is situated and he depicts lads of that time, perfectly. His struggles seem real and his actions demonstrate his inner conflicts. The character of Detective Watson is full of mystery and I want to see how that will be unfolded by the writer. Wishing you good luck with your story ✌️ keep up the good work.

Enjoyed reading the few available chapters. Although some sentences were too descriptive, they were also interesting to read. Keep up the good work.

Interesting story! Although there are too many details, I can see where this story is going and I hope it will only increase with the chapters, keep it up ^^

I stopped midway through the second chapter because I had seen enough. The writing quality is practically impeccable. Little to no typos or misuse of words, and the flow of reading is very smooth. The only little thing I noticed was, you start with well-aired paragraphs at first. But then they become thicker as time goes. Keep them short (2-3 sentences) for flow and ease of read. I give 5 stars for updates, since for now, you posted every day twice. The story development I felt was a little sluggish, because you give a lot of description (it's not inherently bad, but it slows down the story), so try giving a bit less. The character is well designed and relatable for any person who has been dirt poor XD The world background was nice, but I feel it could have used a bit more description :) Overall, very good work, I can sense a lot of potential from this story :) Keep up the good work :)

Have you dropped this book? no updates in 6 months. it's such a good book, I hope you didn't.

One of the best stories I ever read to anyone who thinks this is similar to Lotm it is not. It only is a little similar in the first couple chapters I am currently at chapter 240 and everytime I am nearing to catch up I get sadder and sadder because this is such and amazing story and what hurt me more was when I saw that this hasn’t been updated in over 20 days. Please author I am begging you to start writing more chapters♥️♥️♥️

this is awesome , a really good story one of the few on this plartform

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I really like this novel it is my nearest favourite. I have one request that it is that you increase the number of updates at least until the current Arc is over.

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