charizard_9916
I think it's great that you uploaded it here. To be honest I wouldn't even have started reading this if it wasn't on webnovel. I love this series and while its great that you upload some chapters here. I think you should make sure to stay quite a few chapters behind the official source. So that when people have read it here and want to get more they go to support the aouther. Im gonna be a hypocrite for a litle bit here but I think that you should have not uploaded so many chapters. It makes it so that rather than promoting the original your making an alturnative. I dont know if thats what you wanted to do. If so then im disepointed.
This story wad epic loved it very much cant wait for more. Loved Vandaleu's character development and growth throghout the series, cabt eait for him to get all tge fragments of the demon king and defeat Alda. I think he'll probaly ascend beyong godhood. I do hope he eats Niltark first before beating Alda. The way his power is going i expect even greater things.
it's a wonderful story, but it's a shame the author chose not to grow up Vandalieu both in age and in body he has children and doesn't reach adulthood it's just something that makes any reader of this story sad another factor is that he ended the war and was continuing the story as soon as he talks about how it is outside the planet of Lambda and vandalieu as god he ends up entering the story on hiatus.
I've read a hundred chapters and finally decided to give up. The story is ok but it combines too many elements and slows down the development. I was starting to read just the first sentence or two and skip the rest of a paragraph just to speed up the story up. The writing can seem redundant as a non important idea is explained multiple times. The overall grammar is decent. There are a ton of minor characters leading to bloat.