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Reviews of The Deal With The Deviless

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The Deal With The Deviless

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CASSIAN
CASSIANLv2CASSIAN

This novel for me is like a Bible for believers, I read it before going to sleep with tears in my eyes but if I were to describe it I would probably say this: beautiful great good brilliant sumptuous elegantly adorable appealing unparalleled divinely wonderfully delightful enchanting captivating beautifully seductively exemplary perfectly enchanting superb astonishing laudable wonderfully great superb irresistible grace graciously breathtaking stunning fabulous calligraphic beautifully wonderfully incomparably magically wondrous intoxicating exceptionally

Wajahat_Ejaz
Wajahat_EjazLv1Wajahat_Ejaz

Good bock though there are some mistakes but I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it is as good as this on or better.[img=update] I thank you for making this novel and I hope you will keep on making more.

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

Honestly, I don’t understand why this is so positively rated. The main character is a pathetic loser who constantly says “I’m cursed!” Disgusting.

Sweet_SourKiwi
Sweet_SourKiwiLv12Sweet_SourKiwi

It's nice to read this, it reminds me of the story I used to read, so far just minor errors and a little missing punctuation on each paragraph but for the story itself, it's great, keep it up thor, you have potential here!

Homeless_Traveler
Homeless_TravelerLv1Homeless_Traveler

The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!

ryu11kaizen
ryu11kaizenLv1ryu11kaizen

I do like this story a lot, holding a simple and entertaining tale that some will come to enjoy. though i have to say there are some grammatical issues here and there i really did enjoy the characters and their interactions here! you should give this a read if you haven't

Aira_Rin
Aira_RinLv12Aira_Rin

This story is really interesting. The writer also manages to make readers wonder about the next chapters with each ending of the previous one making readers can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work!

_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3_Rockbison_

Although there is not many chapters uploaded but what l came to after reading a few chapters is that it's gonna be quite mysterious type of story...... Liked the story and characters development..... That girl Hirata is quite mysterious l must say.... It will hook u up for sure.... Recommended this book to everyone...

JulyFantasy
JulyFantasyLv1JulyFantasy

first, i gotta say wow. it drew me in - the characters and the world. I definitely want to find out more about what else is going to happen in the story. good job!

JustGoDie13
JustGoDie13Lv2JustGoDie13

The author's story development and sense of humor are both great, and I also enjoyed the frequent action, but the reason I gave less than 5 stars because there are a lot of grammar issues that distract from the good parts. I think if that is cleaned up a bit the writer's fun style can really shine.

Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4Moonwriting

hi dear author, the book is phenomenal. I love to read it more and more. I fall in love it's characters and world background. Thank you author for giving us a good read......

HouseOfLee
HouseOfLeeLv13HouseOfLee

It looks very good, the start got me hooked to it. The first impression is always important in novels and you nailed attracting me into the story, I’m enjoying the story. Keep up the great work!

Jaison_Arbor
Jaison_ArborLv2Jaison_Arbor

The story is great though some grammatical mistakes can be fixed, the author has done a great job in progressing the story, keep up the good work🍃

Maryam_Mayo
Maryam_MayoLv1Maryam_Mayo

This novel is captivating, I usually don't read this kind of books, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea, plot, and characters are well developed

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

I loved the first chapter. It really drew me in the story. Hinata is so mysterious. Can't wait to know more about her. Btw, the writing style is simple and easy to read. That's why i enjoyed it. Great job author.

Muhammad_Saqlain_7583
Muhammad_Saqlain_7583Lv1Muhammad_Saqlain_7583

The story was creative and unique. It was a breath of fresh air with the characters and the setting of the story in Japan. The twists and turns that happened through out the story was entertaining as well. Though there are some grammatical errors and other writing improvements can be made. The writer has potential and I’m looking forward to the next read for sure.

Sandipan_Dutta_7440
Sandipan_Dutta_7440Lv1Sandipan_Dutta_7440

So far so good story nice pacing and nice plot, I am looking for more chapters this story will rise and the writer did a fantastic job, keep up your good work

Leids7
Leids7Lv2Leids7

Good story bruh! I like the ingenuity of the MC here! But, somehow I feel annoyed with Hinata, you know? so mysterious! well, apart from that, i quite like it!

meowDao
meowDaoLv1meowDao

This book has a definitely bright future if the author chose to keep this up and don't drop it, thx for the great novel 🙏 .......... . .