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Reviews of The dance of fate

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The dance of fate

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Gilgamesh_simp
Gilgamesh_simpLv4Gilgamesh_simp

This story is overall a good story. The idea is great and has a lot of pontential, it is pretty well written and I would recomend it if you like the fate franchise, please do continue updating author

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DJDAN
DJDANLv3DJDAN

It's pretty good, several words are misspelt but it's easy to get over them. This is a meme fic, so if you cant handle that, dont bother reading, but if you enjoy these kind of fics, I suggest giving it a read.

Maid_Ciel1
Maid_Ciel1Lv2Maid_Ciel1

it's good but the author nerf the mc. i mean why make the him/her op if you will just nerf him/her so yeah its good but its not my type of story ✌️✌️✌️😀😀 (english is not my first language)

Not_A_Nenuphar
Not_A_NenupharLv4Not_A_Nenuphar

You should feel bad author, this, I saw this and became eager to read such interesting idea, only to find dissapointment in reality, this has no grammar, absolutely no sense of fluidity, the plot doesn't makes sense and the writing format is a mess! Why?! Why ruin such a good idea in this way?

Duke_of_Insanity
Duke_of_InsanityLv12Duke_of_Insanity

the idea was good but the story was confusing. put too many extra things in the story that made no sense while not explaining anything

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5akasuna123

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