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The cutest omniversal shopkeeper.
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The cutest omniversal shopkeeper.

Wrathos

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Read The cutest omniversal shopkeeper. fanfiction written by the author Wrathos on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering cute, omnishopkeeper. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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This is a story about a transmigrator that ,gets a omniversal shop as one of his wishes. He Unfortunately got greedy in his wishes so he is transformed to look like a kirby. At least he kept his wishes, but how will people take him seriously as a businessman. I do not own Kirby,Harry Potter, Naruto,World of Warcraft,The avatar the last airbender,Legend of korra, Starwars,Overlord, Dead by daylight, My hero academia,konosuba, Cuthulu mythos, and any other stories,characters, and worlds that my MC visits. They all belong to their respective owners, I do not gain any monetary value from making said story. I do this to better my writing, Express my thoughts and opinions on the original works.

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RionSteiner
RionSteinerLv5RionSteiner

Good concept about OP(as if) mc with a store, bad execution of story. MC being kirby the shopkeeper, it really unique but very few readers interested to see that. Mostly readers read some OP human shopkeeper, that MC gain interest many readers. World building so confusing and random specially on early chapters. 1st world naruto world, MC's shop always hop in timeline and different places on naruto world with no indication for the readers that the shop teleported. MC and characters dialogue and interaction so confusing specially on which person is talking on dialogue. MC interaction also suck like a wuss japanese anime generated MC. I tell you he doesn't own the shop even the God said that he fulfill his wish, the shop is sentient and only listen few times on MC. He doesn't even has full control of the shop which the shop always follow the rules that God (who's MC met and fulfilled his with). So basically MC is a kirby with no control and little voice in the shop. Hes only role is being a shop keeper not the owner. So he's a seller or something employed by God to interact with the customer.

TurtleManiacc
TurtleManiaccLv4TurtleManiacc

My large saber is again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again unable to endure the thrist

TheLordOfOrcs
TheLordOfOrcsLv5TheLordOfOrcs

I like the idea a lot but the execution is done poorly the story is sadly badly writen and the world background isn't even a a close to good choice.

Sorrias
SorriasLv5Sorrias

I LOVED THIS FANFIC, KIRBY, MAGIC SHOP CUTENESS, YEEEEEESSSSSSS, you my friend are really a creative one, hard to find those, please don't drop it you have my support!.

SOMMO_ARCANO
SOMMO_ARCANOLv2SOMMO_ARCANO

the story was really good mc is op but not too much, the story is really well written and it developed quite well, i really liked the character because i love kirby and he is one of my favorite characters. the background of the world is quite unique and I recommend reading this beautiful story pity it does not continue

RA_H_UL_5059
RA_H_UL_5059Lv2RA_H_UL_5059

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DaoistvmZpsL
DaoistvmZpsLLv1DaoistvmZpsL

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Fowl_Immortal
Fowl_ImmortalLv3Fowl_Immortal

this is great and pretty enjoyable, but what sold me the most was the fact that the main character look like kirby, just imagining an adorable pink ball in some world with a high death rate opening a shop amuses me.

redlight12
redlight12Lv4redlight12

Good job ............................................. ........................... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~............................................. ........................... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~

MoogleKing
MoogleKingLv2MoogleKing

Very unique and funny spin on the typical omniverse traveling genre.................................................................................

Stone_Forge98
Stone_Forge98Lv4Stone_Forge98

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