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Not sure why this is rated to high it's quite decent but common and not unique from what I've read. It has quite a lot of capitalization errors but the English is readable and better then a lot I've read. Just to really summon it up, it's an average story with a guys dying getting reincarnated into a parallel him? or just another guy with the same name as him in another universe with a system granting him powers in the beginning then having him have to do missions to get points to get more. Anyways this is just my opinion, best of luck to the author
The story leans into emotion quite a bit. which I appreciate. The author is making a clear effort to develop the characters and their personalities. I think emotional moments tend to come off half baked and a tad empty along with the characters. The moments just dont feel earned. With that said, this author is clearly putting in the effort and honestly isnt failing, which is a far cry from what plenty of popular authors do anyways.
While having a somewhat generic start, I really grew to enjoy this webnovel. I mean, I'm dropping my fast passes its way to unlock chapters, so clearly I enjoy it. The writing has some issues, but, eh, nothing debilitating... other than using brackets to denote internal speech, that one does get to me a little. What's wrong with using single inverted commas? Eh, I'm not going to complain too much. The point is, I quite like this, and will probably keep reading it for as long as it updates.
The story is really interesting and the background, even if not fully developed yet, it's original. The only downside (a BIG downside in my opinion and I suppose the main reason for the low ranking of this novel) it's the slowness of updates, it's difficult to be engaged in a story that after months has still only 176 chapters. I suggest the author to speed up the updates.
I you don't read this book, you surely left out on the good story. I love how in this world there are people that are genuinely nice and just living their life day by day. And then there are the selfish and toxic people who think that this world is theirs. And that left the people who follow all the rules. Sound like real world alright.