Reviews of The Conquerors Path
The Conquerors Path
Chaosking
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good storryyyyyy mannn,thee mc develops relationship with the girls first then bang them,not like some novels mc just a sec later born from his mother and womb he magical grows 9 inch dick and kalal sharingan and all that, KEPPP UP THE HOOD WORK MAN , as a man of culture we support ******, netori, harem heheh,but pelz bro dont add lesbian or yuri content just saying my opinion only, and dooo a masss release....
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Everything is good so far, I say so far since there wasnβt enough chaps to actually judge it good. I just wanna give ideas, donβt make the mother be a very easy capture, he is still her son, she took care of him since he was a child so there is bound to be complications when he abruptly changes his view on her, just take it slow. The big sister, perfect, couldnβt have done that better, lil sis, perfect, reminds me of βLittle rascal doesnβt want to meet a bad endβ. Make him do exercise early on, but not to the level where after a year timeskip, he can destroy mountains, thatβs stupid, just enough to get him going. Donβt make this guy rely on his system all the time, since you wrote that he is a straight A student then he should be pretty smart, and people who are good at chess are very good at tactics and split second decision making so you can make use of that. When he starts his first se.x scene, take advantage of the fact that he has watch a lot of **** and hentai that he knows how to pleasure women even though he is a virgin, I already tried that, and I was glad I spent a couple of hours watching po.rn and hen.tai. Donβt let him be a pushover, Itβs kinda weird being a harem protagonist while youβre being dominated in bed. 100 chaps is too long for a se.x scene, just do timeskip dude.
Truthfully The writing quality is bad. Since the author is writing only as a hobby I won't be too harsh. The plot isn't good it contains a few plotholes and since writing quality is bad it's hard to sometimes make out what the author wants to say. Character description is subpar. No updates stability since the author writes when he has time. World Background - Other than a general overview it's blank I would say. And author doesn't read the comments so don't put an effort to mention typos.
I love this novel. Story, characters, setting etc are entertaining and plot moves at a good pace. I see comments about Author allegedly plagiarizing some others words. Frankly I did not notice any of that. Perhaps author can comment about being inspired by the various sources and encourage readers to check out the source work. Author san, please do not let this stop you from continuing your work. We are looking forward to see how this story ends and how protagonist keeps harem all together ultimately.
This novel is one of the few good ones out there. I have been following it for quite a long time and I have to say although there is mistake in grammar here and there it still puts the point forward. I saw that few of the authors of other novel are Saying he copied their novels and I don't really see where though, if its just the lewd scenes that's although kinda bad but its not something irredeemable. So author-san really love your novel don't worry about those people and continue your work.
It is an amazing work, sure the author has made mistakes but that is part of being human and he fixed them and apologized, ignore the self-righteous salty whiners who act as if they haven't messed up before and continue to beat a dead horse. They only decided to complain in the reviews after it was put back up(after fixing the mistakes), showing signs of cancel culture which I am sure most people are sick of.
Okay so I just finished the 47th chapter.... And I'm not gonna lie this novel is extremely good and addictive, and I'm going to tell you why. Writing quality: the first 1-30 chapters have some minor grammatical errors And after 30 chapters the grammatical errors are becoming less in numbers. So over all: a little bit of errors here and there, but nothing too major. Updating stability: One chapter a day. But if it was up to me, I would prefer 12 chapter a day, that's how good the story is. Story development: not world breaking, but really, really fun. with some comedy here and there. It basically starts with the mc getting reincarnated into a ergo game that involves'capturing' woman and making them fall in love with the him. That includes: hes mother/sisters/aunt and many more. It's honestly very fun seeing him try hard and then get the fruits of his lobar.that's the basic premise. But don't misunderstand Of course there's a plot and a good one it that, it's not just about courting woman, but it's the focus of the story. Character design: pretty good, everyone has their own personalitie, but no character is really explored. So that's a shame, but hay I'm not going to complain. World background: the world actually feels Rich and with hidden lore. And I hope the writer can expand on it.( But the writer said he is just writing this for fun and Will drop it when he gets bored, so it's hes chose not mine π ) bonus category: the 's ex' is Good and has a lot of details.( There's no actual penetration UP to this point, just for play, and your going to know the reason if you read it.) Overall: a good novel for those that fancy some good 'se x' and a plot to go with it. Definitely one of my top 10. And a give it: 8.5/10 I highly recommend it to people. suggestions for the writer: 1. Make the world a more mysterious Place.(add some folk lore that Will happen in the future or something. I recommend you read "reverend insanity" and get some inspiration for the world building, But add your own twist to it. Cause reverend insanity, is the king of world building and can give you some ideas on how to handle things. 2. Add a little more depth to the characters. 3. Expend on the blood line system and the original owners of them. 4. You've got to work on hand to hand combat choreography. Because it feels a little underwhelming. And that's about it. Note: I know it might seem like I'm demanding or telling the author what to do. But I'm honestly so worried that this novel might become bad. Because it's so, so Goddamn hard to find a good novel with a promising future AND an author who actually listens to hes fans. And if I'm being harsh, it's actually from my love of this novel and wanting it to become number 1 on this site. Because if the author continuous on this road he will get big. Mark my words Thank you for reading.π€
This novel is a hidden gem. I never read a novel who do the reincarnated in a game this way. The heroines are really fun and the mc is fighting for his live. The mc actually uses his knowledge to get powerful without to depend on his system. The system is more like a map that show him hints how to act and doesnβt make him op without instantly. Now to the bad part of the story. The grammar and structure are sometimes really bad. It doesnβt make the story unreadable but it do make it confusing sometimes. The author knows it and is re-editing his novel. It gets better in the later chapters and you can see how the author keeps improving. Maybe the author could think about getting a editor to help him with the grammar. Overall Iβm very happy to find this novel and hopefully it gets the recognition it deserves.
Manβ¦ Iβve already reviewed this novel, but here I am reviewing it again because of my weird obsession... The heroines in this novel are realistic since they donβt instantly fall in love with him, and they act like normal girls. Thatβs all I wanted to say. Bye. -From the number 1 fan of this novel. (Literally)
Author, I honestly have no words as to how much I enjoy your writing. Simply seeing the fact that a new chapter is updated fills me with joy, knowing that for at least a few minutes I'll enjoy myself. And when I see that I am all caught up and there are no new chapters, I'm filled with a bit of loss due to the fact that I don't know what to read. I truly enjoy your amazing work and look forward to even more to come!
