Such a beautiful story ❤️❤️. I was glad to read this story. There was beautiful job, done by the author. 😍😍😍😍. I liked the story title and content also. I am a author also. Two beautiful story was written by me. They are waiting for a great reviewers. If any one like it, please do this great job guys. I will wait for posting a new chapter of this novel. GOD BLESS YOU.😊😊
What a beautiful story that portrayed innocence, beauty, good, evil, loyalty and sacrificial love that is relateable! The character build up was strong and detailed. If anything can be changed I would love to read more details of their ending just because it was so beautiful. There are minor spelling errors.
The first chapter was so rushed, just spilling a bunch of historical details. A story is much better when there’s real narrative not just facts about the world. The characters and some of the story are too obviously taken from other books, eg “married to the devils son” and “Young Master Damiens pet”. Even the cover art is directly from “Married to the Devil’s Son”; hopefully the art was free for everyone to use. I had hope the story might redeem itself by becoming more unique, but there were only 5 free chapters, most other books have several more free chapters, I wont be continuing the read because it wasn’t enough to convince me the writing would be good or even original.