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Reviews of The Chronicles of The Ash Von-Kade

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The Chronicles of The Ash Von-Kade

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immortal_sword
immortal_swordLv4immortal_sword

Sorry auther but you should of just wished for powers of onmikineises and tribred bloodline with a inborn alpha status that can never be taken from mc

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

Wished for some retarded **** like a new family, and also wished for weapons that would be able to kill him..thats retarded, like why would anyone wish for something to kill em and then give to the world?...retarded...like the book in chp one talks atleast 2 paragraphs about how smart this ****er was and this wish shows that he is a retard..its stupid

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benjamin_plaisance
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Plaxa
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Kxng_X_Crooks
Kxng_X_CrooksLv14Kxng_X_Crooks

So for the story is good just writing about the originals makes me want to read it .....................................................................