FallenButterfly
Hi! Shamelessly reviewing my own story here. I will give an honest review of my own story as well as personal interests why I liked it. Writing quality? I'm not so sure with this myself, I'm more of into straight facts writing and I'm new to creative writing. I don't know. Grammar-wise, I have to be honest, my grammar really needs improvement. I know this myself, even widening my vocabulary is a must. Everyone can notice that I don;t have stability when it comes to updating, I'm still on the process of getting the hang of it so I want to apologize. In the future, I will work harder to stock pile chapters. I felt like the story was progressing slow? This is my point-of-view as a reader by the way. Though I don't plan to stay that way, I don't want to put a lot of unnecessary chapters/events. I want everything to matter in the end. Not that I'm opposed to meek and shy FL , I quite like them actually but for this particular plot I want to have a strong and independent FL . One that will not be overshadowed by the ML. This is also a personal reason for me, because I believe women should be like Xi Ana. Strong and can stand on her own. I'm not gonna delve on the world background as I believe we have different perceptions of that. Please do support my story! Leave comments and reviews, I will surely reflect on them. You can also ask questions, I will answer them to the best of abilities. Thank you!
I rarely give 5 stars, yeah I'm that picky but this story is an exception! I love it so much. The healthy relationship and the trust they put on each other is really admirable. I also love how the fl is more reserved and aloof, while the ml is the clingy type and emotional one and how he's always blushing is too cute to handle (It's rare to find a male lead like this and I need more hero with cute personality , dominering in front of other people but so sweet and shy only in front of his wife) Both characters are really my cup of tea. It's so hard to find main characters like them, that's why when I finally found ur story I can't stop smiling. And don't forget about the beautiful friendships between all of the characters, it's so heartwarming. Seriously, this is a hidden gem! You deserves more views and recognition. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Just like everyone else, I really enjoyed romance. I liked the way you explain the situation and how you detail things, amazing. The only thing that displeased me were the text walls, a bit tiring to read, but this is a personal opinion and please do not take it as if I was diminishing your work, because I found the 17 chapters I read sincerely incredible.
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Xi Ana is a strong person. That's how I view this new romance novel that caught my eye. In a platform with so many different types of romance, it's nice to find a diamond in the rough that really captures your attention. The characters are well thought out and you want to follow them and get to know them more. The world, set in what I assume is our modern era, shines in the way the setting is written. I have a few concerns with the writing, but the grammars don't break the story's flow at all. Keep up the good work, Author!
Great novel. Light hearted, female and male lead have great chemistry and it doesn't seem like it will be pointlessly long (have only read 28 chapters so far but it I don't want it to end ever) There is no unnecessary violence towards women, the characters feel like real people and the story flows well.
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