Shamelessly giving myself five complete stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I'm only going to be asking for your votes and reviews because I need them the most. This might be my first story you have bumped into but this is actually the third. My first story: ONE NIGHT TOGETHER My second story: Annie's perfect husband Go try it out and keep voting for the rise of this new story... Give me your suggestions and feedbacks on my discord channel https://discord.gg/sPJ3yyj. Thanks!!!
Well author I read our story one night together ... And after reading it I was so happy you have penned it so well..... Now I am more happy that I can read your this story and the other 2 stories too... You over all ratings should be 5+5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟. Will wait for update till your exams get over. 😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗💖💖💖
The story is about Zhaolin and Xueyan, their friendship, their struggles and their love. In beginning chapters, a lot of characters were introduced all at once. This was very confusing. Confusion that will either make readers begin to wonder what significant role will they contribute in the development of the plot and continue reading or put down the novel because of migraine. Slowly introducing the characters followed a brief narration of their relationship with the main characters would have been better. Needless to say, the family dinner should never have been there. Or written much later when readers are slowly acquainted with the characters. The novel had a very slow start but picked up its pace in the succeeding chapters. I like the development of the story. But there are chapters devoted to other characters. It shifted the spotlight to other characters. which again makes me wonder if I'm reading the same novel. Overall I like the story and I can't wait for the continuation of the journey of the two main characters. Congratulations.
Angel05 plz don't disappoint the fans and readers u earn.... I really ur story so plazzzz give some to ur fans emotions and fixed ur irregularity and lateness in updating.. The story.. Characters and plot can kept going the readers inrerset they are 100 original on WN but only few bcom sensational original hits.. U can also bcom one from it.. Hope u hear my pled seriously.. Best of luck
With it being one of a few the author has written in English it is well written a few grammatical errors but over good. The introduction to new characters is very fast, and a few minor issues with figuring out if something is a flash back, but amazing storyline. I can’t wait to see how the rest plays out!