35 Update

So I read through my work and I was not satisfied with what I had written. The main character felt flat, and a bit random, the setting even more so.

Now I'm working with a friend of mine to flesh out chapters for the rework. For those that will drop this novel while the rework is in progress I hope I entertained to this point. However I do believe the second writing of the castle story will be better fleshed out and will be a better story overall.

I just wanted to tell you, this story hasn't been abandoned, just it's current edition will be seen as the first draft. I am putting in all my effort so that the rewrite will be the final draft I have to write.

Once the proof reading and editing has been done, I will start uploading chapters. For those who would like to give a helping hand, I offer you a discord where you can discuss some things, and maybe read the unedited chapters if your willing to proofread.

https://discord.gg/JhVpyFC

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