Reviews of The Broken System - One Piece

A broken protag doing what he wants across the multiverse. I write what i feel like doing, if you don't like it feel free to leave a 1 star.

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Nice story. I'm waiting for more chapters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Great story so far and MC brutal enough, hope chapter this story will update.anyway thank you for novel.

Dear author.........character development is a major pillar of a story..without it....the stories garbage....like what happened?...in cho 1 it was 4/10 but then it just went to zero...like theres zero CD and SD.....the MC is bland and so are all the other characters..like this isnt a bash,,,its just that the SD, CD and even WQ are barely present

Love it! Is there any chance of you picking this up again? I think the premise i very intresting. I do sure hate This 140 minimum Word requirement

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