Reviews of The Bloody Emissary of Justice
The Bloody Emissary of Justice
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This is my newest fanfic. Hope you guys like this as I have put a lot of my time and effort into it. And although in this fanfic that people would argue about some things so, please keep in mind that everything is according to the context and you must read the story by focusing on the context and not just a single line or sentence. And honestly it's you choice what reviews you want to give, but do not use uncivilized language in y comments and do not say things like "I want to kill this author" or "I want him to stop writing" because I write the fanfics for fun, not for pandering to others.
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Well, I confess it was more for personal taste ... The story is not bad, but particularly that whole thing of justice, that bull**** of the goddesses, is not for me. I'm not saying that I don't like fair protagonists, but just having that as an objective or even accepting all that responsibility for nothing, like nothing at all. Sure, it has the protagonist's background story, but let's be honest that what he needs is no longer responsibility, but a therapist. It seems that even after everything he went through, everything he saw, he didn’t grow into anything, didn’t learn anything and didn’t even develop ... He was stuck, static in that state since he was a child. He didn't look like an emissary from justice to me, just a traumatized and broken child, who lost a lot and got stuck in the past. As far as I read, the feelings that passed me were of pity for the protagonist and revolt by the Goddesses, to me it seemed that they were abusing a vulnerable person. From what I see, I think the author is going to develop the character in the worlds he’s going to visit, so he won’t be in that state forever and it’s probably going to be good, but this beginning was kind of discouraging, not because it’s bad, but because of the way I felt reading. I say again that this was private to me, maybe other people like it or feel different ... My personal taste, I don't mean that the story is bad or good, only those were the impressions it caused me. It may be that in the future I have motivation to read this story and if it happens I will change my review.
(Written in Google Translate) So far, the only criticism I have for the story is the short chapters, with an extremely slow development. This is becoming irritating, for example: a scene that could supposedly occur in the next chapter, takes more than 2/3 because of the absolutely huge explanations, which cover the extremely small chapter and leave 0 space for Development, or even, the lack of development itself, which is filling words or situations that almost nobody cares about.
the novel is good and the charecter development is very nice i like the idea your going with this novel and dont rush into the relationships . their are a few plot holes but they can be ignored like where he got back his emotions in one chapter and next you made him emotionless again i dont mind but it is a little bit annoying only a little and this is just a request but can u make auxillary chapter for the harem members with their pictures please i am begging u on behalf of all those people who have low imagination like me . Great novel 5 stars
Look Author, your idea is great nice how it goes, some misspelling but nothing great to Hurt it. The worst you do are 2 things that if you fix you should really makes it a better work. First: CHILDREN ARE REALLY REALLY STUPID THEY DO NOT THINK LIKE ADULTS DONT BLUSH AND THEY ONLY THINK POOP OR SOMETHING!😁 Second: DO YOU HAVE A GOLDFISH'S MEMORY OR SOMETHING? IN BETWEEN 20 WORDS YOU MAKE THE M.C. 4 Y.O. AND 6 Y.O. OR A TIER 1-5 TO 1-4. That's it as readers we can't expect anything from the Authors but at least don't make mistakes about your own story at least and the he/she him/her because it makes story really painfull to read, that's it good luck. 😊
@49 ch I like the way the protagonist slowly changes from a apathetic,distrustful and unemotional charterer to a person who starts to feel diffrent emotions akin to the first time. a few character interactions could have been better(like the one b/w ryouma and karna ) i hope the antagonists are good enough to spice things up In overall the novel is based on a good concept but it's too early to tell anything about it.
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