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The Bloody Angel

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The story potential is high. The narration is splendid, the pacing and character designs are outstanding. World building is well thought, though the only problem is you need to roughly edit the Chaps. Dialogues are sometimes not starting with capital letters. The punctuations are misused and there are unnecessary spacings sometimes. Making me to pity the story as the potential is great. Write more and don't be discouraged, I know you will improve in one or two years time. Here's five stars to brighten up your mood. ✨

foxyash
foxyashLv2foxyash

This story is so interesting 😸😸😸 loved the characters....the author has done great job. The characters and plotline is so strong and well defined....it has a great potential to go forward. Great Work!

Hand_Number_37
Hand_Number_37Lv1Hand_Number_37

Haha, the setting is quite funny, and the premise seems to be building up naturally for the princess. The smooth transition between different POV is amazing. All in all a funny, good, and engrossing story. Looking forward to read more.

geewintG
geewintGLv1geewintG

The story has potential. Armed with great world background and story progression, it will draw in readers, however, I did come across mishaps in the first few chapters. It includes the need of proper punctuation and was lacking spaces in areas, but it can be done with editing. Readers can try it out. Great job, author.

swarnadeepsaha2005
swarnadeepsaha2005Lv1swarnadeepsaha2005

Pretty good I should say. The plot is good and the writing quality is also good. I love this kinds of stories. I can see the authors passion from reading it.

Ariel_x
Ariel_xLv1Ariel_x

Interestingly, this is not out normal princess and the beast kind of romance. It is a new picture of romance entirely that will give you chills. It is a very intriguing novel that I will recommend to everyone. Please do add to your respected libraries. Thank you!

Cloudthief
CloudthiefLv1Cloudthief

It's a beyond interesting concept with good world-building, characters, and story-development. Only problem I have is the quality of the writing. The vocabulary is great, It's just the diction which doesn't poke me right. If the author fixes those small mistakes then I bet this story could become a great one! All the best luck to your author!

chimychimes
chimychimesLv2chimychimes

quite nice I must say, you got a way with words.* whisper* the bloody angel. that really sent a chilling sensation down my spine, not forgetting the synopsis. the alphas are here...

Sumayya_Riaz
Sumayya_RiazLv1Sumayya_Riaz

Nice story🌿🌿🌿👍keep it up!👍 It is fantasy so I choose to go over it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

TitanMaster
TitanMasterLv1TitanMaster

This is definitely an entertaining read for fantasy nerds like myself. the world itself is enticing and the story makes you not want to stop.

Fritziest
FritziestLv1Fritziest

Good plot, although I felt like some parts are rushed. It has nice taste of character traits. Awesome work right there despite some of the flaws I spotted.

WyattJaymes54
WyattJaymes54Lv1WyattJaymes54

This story is amazing. The worldbuilding is amazing. The sentences seem to make sense and leave me wanting more. The storyline is good but it lacks emotion. All in all, a good read. I definitely recommend this story to all fantasy lovers

Kuroyasha404
Kuroyasha404Lv1Kuroyasha404

The world building and character designs are good. However I felt that the pacing was really rushed at some places and few scenes were not clearly described.

SilverNexusPendrag
SilverNexusPendragLv5SilverNexusPendrag

The idea and premise of the story is a great one. The idea of a kingdom having such a ritual in order to choose a crown prince/princess is in many way like those in old Norse or even that of Rome where only the act of suffering can one become strong enough to lead. However I only have one thing negative to say and that is the story is moving too fast as it feels like its on fast forward,

Theblue_wings
Theblue_wingsAuthorTheblue_wings

Author here guys, I have figured out lack of proper punctuation, grammatical errors and rushed dialogues. Will give my best to give error less work. Thanks

Ultimatedaywriter
UltimatedaywriterLv4Ultimatedaywriter

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knossos
knossosLv4knossos

Writing quality brings this novel low. OP really needs to go over his writing with a spell check. Please, this would help make the novel look better. The description is a bit sleazy, but that's okay. Keep up the good work.

funicon
funiconLv1funicon

There's a lot I liked about this novel. The character descriptions are vivid. This novelist has a real ability to make you "feel" what the characters are experiencing. I thought the plot was entertaining and well-paced as well. The only point off would be in some of the grammar and spelling early on. But for me, that didn't make me enjoy the story any less.

Davidwatts6
Davidwatts6Lv1Davidwatts6

you won't find a better fantasy thriller novel the narration is good the story is captivating and can easily understood few things were messing up the story but the writer fixed those so overall a good read nice work author

fifyfd
fifyfdLv1fifyfd

the writer has done awesome work, the story and narration both at their best, the chapter has a few grammatical mistakes but it doesn't make any big effect on the story that are been improved in the further chapters good work author