Xerulo
Now I've been In love with his one. The characters are not without backgrounds. All of them have some backstory. Some characters are especially badass ,like the Demon general , he's one of my fav's. If you're going to give this book a chance then keep in mind there are some errors as the Author is new. But he's has improved a bit chapter by chapter. Trust me you're not going to regret reading this.
AMAZING AND COOL. Two words to describe the concept, plot, pacing, and flow of the story. Although there are things you need to pay attention to: the use of commas, and capitalizations. But overall, grammar is good. Chen reminded me of Chen from EXO, I don't know why, haha. But yeah, this book is another must-read.
Interesting start. Grammar could use some work. Capitalization is missing in some parts and some sentences are missing a linking verb or two. Prose would drasticlly improve with grammar, as well as using more descriptive words. Dialogue is fine, so long as the grammar of them improves. I might suggest that you use a "said" replacement cheat sheet to add some more spice to the dialogue, as wellas swapping the Prologue and World Info chapters for more consisteny. Over all a very remarkable effort. Keep on writing 👍
A good beginning, it establishes why the mc is special and how. I don't really read cultivation stuff, but even if I didn't understand everything, the story and writing is good enough to still be able to follow along. I couldn't find any grammar errors, the characters were well developed, and the story progressed naturally. A really good cultivation novel all and all.
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