Reviews of 16247513805317505

Very good story so far, lots of work into the development of the characters, setting, and the plot. Although the plot hasn't been set into motion yet, the work is very detailed and is in the first person perspective. Looking forward to the rest of the story as well as the rise of both major and minor conflicts as well as character developments! Great work author and keep improving.

My, my, my, what do we have here? An amazing story written by a capable person? I think sooooo~ I myself don't quite care for these genres but I couldn't help but get intrigued with this gem. Author keep up the good work. Honestly if you keep this up and improve even by a little down the line, you may end up in the big leagues.

It has great potential, it just needs some refining! Nice job Lowa. Quite interesting story with a unique premise and unique characters that are decently fleshed out.

the characters can be understood dispite being very different from the people of our world. theres yet to be a serious cliffhanger but i still want to keep reading. thankyou author for writing this book, you can do it!