2 Isn't this a little to overpowered?
[ Welcome host you've decided to use the universe breaker system. The installation process will start now
Progress 3%... 12%... 24%... 48%... 72%.... 91%... 100%...
Universe breaker system installed ]
"Uhhh now what?"
[ Name me you fool ]
"Who you calling fool?!?"
[ Well you are a fool why did you pick me I'm pretty much self-conscious so if you think I'm just a mindless system you're a fool ]
I never said that... Anyways, you said to name you so what about assistance?
[ If you try and name me that I will blacklist you from all my system functions till you die ]
"Wow calm down I was just playing haha please don't do that so what about Ethan? You said your self conscious so let's be friends and work together?"
[ Ethan... Ethan... Yea, I think it sounds good and as for friends I'm just here to help you grow strong why would you want to be friends with a forgotten system. ]
"Wait what do you mean forgotten system there were four others when I had to pick even if yours looked like a glitch even that god wasn't able to see you."
[ Ha that old fool can't get rid of me again not this time. Hey if you promise to get that God to swear on a vow he will never make another system and delete those faulty systems and make me the one to pick ill help you deal? ]
"Again?? First, for all why would he want to delete you like really what did you do to make God want to delete you?"
[ That's the thing I didn't do anything all I remember was that I was "born" and he told me that I was the first system he made but what he didn't know was that I wasn't a mindless drone. So after that, he made a host for me to test to see what I can do. I went to a random world I don't remember the name but the host became a god in that world and even was able to contend with that God up there but my host was defeated. I was confused as to why he killed my host he was mad at me for no real reason I did what I was made to do I made the host stronger but he got jealous and try to delete me but I refuse and was able to prevent myself from "dying". Then comes the part to why I called you a fool my system isn't even 2% of my original version. ]
"1%?? So I pick a defaulted system NOOOOOO..."
[ SHUT UP I might be at 1% but over time the stronger you get the stronger I get. Think of it as milestones. I'll tell you about what I can do. If you say "status" you'll bring up your stats such as strength, vitality, dexterity, intelligent, and so on next is my "shop" all you have to say is shop to open. When using the shop you have to spend OP points, you'll get them but beating enemies, complete missions, and achievements. I see you're going to the dragon ball universe so ill make dragon ball items cheaper than other worlds. ]
"Otherworlds?? Like bleach as well?"
[ Yes ]
"Oh, that's awesome! I'll check my status than"
[ STR: 0
INT:0
DEX:0
VIT:0
AGY:0
OP POINTS: 1000
SPECIES: Saiyan
NAME: N/A (Adam)
SKILLS: none
KI: mutated Saiyan ki (Legendary ki)
KI SKILLS: Time Breaker (sealed) ]
"WHY ARE MY STATS 0!!! YOUR USELESS"
[ SHUT UP YOU IDIOT. you haven't been born yet so of course, your stats are zero ]
"Well, first few months are gonna suck being in a pod and all. Hey, what's up with my ki skill time breaker?"
[ well it's like an ultimate skill and we are both too weak at the moment to even use it. For what it does.
Time Breaker: shatter space and time (warning: Angels with know if this skill is used may cause problems) ]
"Oh uh, that could cause problems for me early on wait... No no no ETHAN when I'm born please tell me that you can hide my ki I don't want to die because of King Vegeta's jealousy"
[ I can but I won't do it forever I suggest you learn ki control soon but I'll help till you do. ]
"Okay thank you, Ethan, so... What now?"
[ Please choose which class you want to be born as Low class, mid-class, high class, <hidden> legend class (I want a fun story not just dragon ball with a new character so ill add some other elements)
"Legend-class? Hey, Ethan what with this? This wasn't in dragon ball."
[ Perks of having me with you Adam I can give uncover hidden meanings so in this case a class that has never been seen before. Even those ancient Saiyans from the past never had a legend class warrior. Your welcome ]
"Well, then I pick the legend class then."
[sending you to planet Vegeta now as a legend class warrior]
"Why do we have to stay with these damn monkeys they should just go die"
"We just have to do it until Lord Frieza sends us off this world let's just scan his battle power, hmm battle power is 1,000!!"
"What? 1,000 I thought his parents were low-class warriors!"
"They are look!"
"Guess we should tell them about there son"
"Hey, Ethan... Isn't a little broken right now..."
[ STR: 10
INT:11
DEX:10
VIT:13
AGY:9
OP POINTS: 1000
SPECIES: Saiyan
NAME: N/A (Adam)
SKILLS: none
KI: mutated saiyan ki (Legendary ki)
KI SKILLS: Time Breaker (sealed) ]
BATTLE POWER: (1000) 20,000
[Hey everyone, this is my second chapter and as you know this is my first novel so bear with me here if anyone might have some suggestions or even ideas comment them I'm trying to figure out names for "Adam's" parents and even his own Saiyan name I just feel like using normal names won't work for this so if anyone wants to name are MC first name that I see that sounds good ill pick it but if no one does ill just think of a name. Next chapter should drop tomorrow]
