Reviews of THE BEGINNING OF THE END

The synopsis got me hooked to the story... an unique storyline with relatable characters. Good job done on bringing new and unique plot...loved your work author. 🙂

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I just read the first chapter. Maybe you can work on grammar and all, other than that I love the story. You can put in a little work on the pacing and speed of the story. because a lot happened in the first chapter itself. And if you could add something which grabs the reader's attention, that would be great. Overall, I loved this story. Keep going [img=recommend]