Reviews of The Before Of Afterlife: A tower climbing Litrpg
The Before Of Afterlife: A tower climbing Litrpg
Absolute_Dominator
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Hello everyone, Absolute Dominator here. As the writer I of course like the book but that's not the reason I gave it 5 stars. Though this is my first work, and grammar may not be the best aspect of the book, the story makes up for it. Read yourself and leave a review...
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I've always been a fan of system stories, I mean where the MC is like a character in a game. I like how Alaric's genuine curiosity about death rooted from childhood which somehow was highlighted for me when he was referred to as someone loved/surrounded by death. For the writing style, I'd like to say that the narration is great, and it's not hard to understand. Continue writing, I'd like to see how this one goes.😊
The novel is simple and interesting, the author didn't use a complicated plot the novel development is smooth I recommend to anyone who is looking for a Good novel with mystery There's no error with the translation, its updated on time “Well..what happened after “death” Is a mystery There was a pause in between You will solve when you are older” I like the way it was written Thump up to you author Jiayo , you've got this
Your ideas are great but again, writing quality needs work on improving. I would recommend using free grammar app like grammarly to help you fix spelling and grammar. Another thing I feel like you could work on is decribing characters more. Painting a great image out for a character makes them more memorable. Aside from that, I think your plot and ideas are great, just keep working on the execution.
I love the peace of the story as it sucks you in as you progress through the chapters. The story is well written together with the characters. The grammar flaws and that in it self makes you enjoy the story, not to mention that it gets so hyped in only a few chapters in. Keep it up author. I am putting this in my library and waiting for more chapters.