A_lucid_Dreamer
Action-packed and riddled with pain, Elijah's story is heartfelt. The more you read, the deeper 'the Beasts of Men' dives into what makes humans human under the analogy of Beastmen. I do suggest the author go through their work again and see if they would do anything differently in terms of formatting and grammar. All the best!
The story starts right at the point without any fake start. There's a bit of infodump in the first chapter, but it seemed to work on WN(I don't know actually). But as far as the story goes it's written in WN format and for a specific audience, if you solve the flow it would be more more promising. Good luck in your journey.
A few grammatical errors here and there, a good concept of the mc, I loved it as there's a dash of Mmorpg in it, which am a big fan of since I was a kid, overall the world building is great aswell and I'm expecting more from this book... The main problem that I have is low stability on updates!! Author, put some elbow grease on it, and I shall thank you for your hard work... :)
Something I really liked about this story was the world building and the emphasis it put on the characters background. Its something I don't see in a lot of books, and it felt really refreshing to dive into a fully fleshed out world, kudos to the author there. The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. A few grammatical errors here and there, but they can easily be overlooked. A lovely read, beautiful work
Very interesting setting and premise, a slight reminder of the Wereworld series. However, exposition is given mainly by the narrator and not incorporated into the story, while the writing style throws me off a bit. Will be adding it to my library though, it's got great potential! One can tell the author has a lot of passion for this work, with the character design drawings and all
Woah! you have an interesting plot here and I'm sure this would be a hit if you do it in the right way, which you are by the way. One piece of advice would be to proofread again. Like for thoughts, don't use brackets as it disrupts the flow. Either you could just add it as a description or use apostrophe. Good luck, Author!